Remember that idea I had? About that Hunger Games AU story? 

Well, I tried to write a first paragraph of it and now I need some feedback. 

I shot up, gasping for air. The voice of Luna still chimed through my mind as I took in my surroundings. I was okay. I was in my grey room, with the big mirror and the soft bedsheets. I closed my eyes again. Her last scream when the axe of that boy from five shot through her chest haunted me. 

 Today.

 I got up. My closet was full of black clothes. My favorite. Just in the back, there where some colourful spots visible. This was what I needed.

 Today. 

Got anything? 

Should I maybe write in another perspective? A different time like in the persent? More Details? 

Something?