๐elcome to the final chapter of ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐'s awards, where the esteemed spirits of the ocean have crowned the creators who dared to sail across its boundless waters.
Each winner's work is a pearl, concealing whispers from afarโof timeless beauty and craftsmanship born from the courage to seek inspiration in shadowed trenches and enchanted reefs.
These creators have woven their legacy into the ocean's sands, destined never to be swept away.
๐ฎ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐, dear winners! And to those who have not won, do not lose heartโfor the ocean stands with those who persevere.
๐ค ๐ฮนััฮท'ั โญฮฑฮทฮฝฮฑัใโฌ๐พ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐พ๐ใ ๐ฏ๐
แดแดแด ษขแด ~ FaeHanna_05
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏น Eden at Yuletide by ella_rowan ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Text Clarity: 5/5
Typography: 4/5
Visual Impact: 7/10
Relevance: 7/10
Creativity & Originality: 9/10
Enjoyment: 9.5/10
Total: 41.5/50
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏น Mafia's Heartbeat by thehotswans ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Text Clarity: 4.5/5
Typography: 3/5
Visual Impact: 9/10
Relevance: 8/10
Creativity & Originality: 6/10
Enjoyment: 10/10
Total: 40.5/50
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏น Nemesis: A Tale Of Vengeance by wenshi_nykx ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Text Clarity: 5/5
Typography: 5/5
Visual Impact: 6/10
Relevance: 7/10
Creativity & Originality: 8/10
Enjoyment: 8/10
Total: 39/50
เฃช๐ค ๐ยขะฝฯ ๐ฌฦ ๐ฑะฝั ๐ััฯ ใโฌ๐พ๐๐ ๐ฏ๐๐๐ ๐พใ๐ฏ๐
แดแดแด ษขแด ~ author_rosalin
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นNEPENTHE by Twix345 ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Score: 49/50
Feedback: I love how this title portraits the whole theme of story and how it perfectly fits along it. This is one of unique titles I have seen so far and it's quite creative too. This title is doing well job in attracting reader's. Well done.2nd position: love end's all
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏น Love Ends All by k00kiesandch0c0lates ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Score: 47/50
Feedback: I love this title, I can literally see what will happen in story after reading this. It provides a clear view of story itself and is quite unique in itself. It is quite catchy and bold. Well done.
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏น Lifestyle of America by KPOP_CLUB_97 ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Score: 45/50
Feedback: This title was really cool. I mean I was thinking it's about something else but the way you used it in your story is appreciative. This provides a amazing view for story and I loved it . Well done.
๐ค โญฯฮฑััฮฑโ ๐ฮนะฒั ใโฌ๐พ๐๐ ๐๐๐บ๐๐บ๐ผ๐๐พ๐ ๐๐พ๐๐๐๐พ๐๐๐ผ ใ๐ฏ๐
แดแดแด ษขแด ~ 7Bibliophile3
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏น Sacrificed Love by guxixthv ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Visual Aesthetic: 39/40
Personal Alignment: 27/30
Originality: 9/10
Creativity: 9/10
Overall Impression: 10/10
Total: 94
Review:The black-and-white theme is visually striking. The mood boards are stunning, with a seamless placement of photographs and perfectly worded quotes that suit the character aesthetics wonderfully.
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นA Ballad of Falling Light by XxFaylinexX ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Visual Aesthetic: 36/40
Personal Alignment: 26/30
Originality: 10/10
Creativity: 10/10
Overall Impression: 9/10
Total: 91
Review: The mood boards are vivid, vibrant, and incredibly powerful. Each image is beautifully chosen, with unique quotes and one-liners that bring a spectacular cohesion to the character aesthetics.
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นVengeance by -jennieverse-๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Visual Aesthetic: 32/40
Personal Alignment: 28/30
Originality: 8/10
Creativity: 8/10
Overall Impression: 9/10
Total: 85
Review: Although not presented as mood boards, the characters' personalities are conveyed aesthetically and harmoniously. The images have a beautiful alignment that is visually pleasing and unique.
ึด เฃช๐ค ๐ฮนโั'ั ๐ัฮฑัั ใโฌ๐พ๐๐ โฌ๐ ๐๐๐ป ใ๐ฏ๐
แดแดแด ษขแด ~ -jennieverse-
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นStarstruck Secrets by strawberry1d๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Grammar: 8/10
The grammar is mostly solid, with clear sentence structure and no major mistakes. However, some sentences could be reworded for smoother flow. For example, "blocks out love and destiny" feels a bit awkward and could be rephrased to sound more natural.
Clarity: 7/10
The blurb is fairly clear in conveying the main conflict (forbidden romance between a famous idol and a trainee), but it gets slightly repetitive. The mention of keeping their relationship hidden is stated twice, which reduces the effectiveness. A more concise expression of this could improve clarity.
Originality: 5/10
The premise of a forbidden romance in the K-pop industry is interesting, but not entirely unique. The themes of fame, secrecy, and romance between an idol and a trainee are common in fanfiction and romance genres. More distinctive elements or a twist would improve originality.
Overall Impact: 6/10
The blurb sets up a potentially engaging story with high stakes, but the overall impact is somewhat reduced by the familiar tropes and slightly repetitive phrasing. It does create intrigue, but the lack of something truly unique makes it feel a bit generic.
Expressing: 6/10
The blurb expresses the central theme of love versus career well, but it could benefit from more vivid or emotionally charged language. Words like "heartthrob" and "blossoming romance" are a bit clichรฉ, and using more specific, dynamic language could enhance the emotional expression.
Total: 32/50
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นChildren Stories by KPOP_CLUB_97๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Grammar: 6/10
The blurb has minor grammatical errors. "Fun filled" should be "fun-filled," and phrases like "through which they could have a better character" feel awkward. The overall sentence structure lacks polish.
Clarity: 5/10
While the intent is clear, the phrasing is redundant and lacks fluidity. Terms like "fun-filled and child-friendly mini series" could be simplified. The blurb tries to pack too much information into one sentence, making it harder to follow.
Originality: 3/10
The premise of teaching morals through short stories is standard and offers no new angle. The blurb doesn't present any unique aspects of the stories or why they stand out from other children's books.
Overall Impact: 4/10
The blurb lacks a strong hook to capture interest. It reads as generic and fails to create a sense of excitement or uniqueness. The phrase "HAPPY READING!!" feels amateurish.
Expressing: 4/10
The expression is basic and lacks depth. Phrases like "valuable morals" are vague, and the overall tone feels rushed and unoriginal.
Total: 22/50
เฃช๐ค ๐ฮนััั ๐ฮฑฮฝั ใโฌ๐พ๐๐ โฑ๐๐๐๐ โ๐๐๐พโ๐ซ๐บ๐๐บ๐๐๐บ๐๐ ใ๐ฏ๐
แดแดแด ษขแด ~ SSears90
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นLand in Between by jacquelyngilmore ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Score: 50/50
โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นThe Royal Moon by lupe6583v๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Score: 50/50
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นBeyond Bloodline: Unbreakable Bonds by Pulchra_Aurum ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Score: 49/50
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นOblivion: A Timeless Void by Aster_Rae27 ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Score: 48/50
โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นDrawing the Ace by MyriamRow ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Score: 48/50
ึด เฃช๐ค ๐ยขัฮฑฮท'ั ๐ ัgฮนฮทฮทฮนฮทg ใโฌ๐พ๐๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐พ ใ๐ฏ๐
แดแดแด ษขแด ~ Rae_darling
๐ ๐๐ข๐ง๐ง๐๐ซ .แ
โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นCassandra de Ville by lupe6583v๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Grammar: 9/10
Pacing and Concision: 9/10
Intro: 9/10
Enjoyment: 9/10
Originality: 9/10
Total: 45/50
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นVico's Lovely Tutor by Allegratheold๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Grammar: 9/10
Pacing and Concision: 8/10
Intro: 8/10
Enjoyment: 8/10
Originality: 8/10
Total: 41/50
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นNemesis: A Tale of Vengeance by wenshi_nykx๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Grammar: 7/10
Pacing and Concision: 7/10
Intro: 8/10
Enjoyment: 8/10
Originality: 8/10
Total: 38/50
ึด เฃช๐ค ๐ฮทโ ๐ฌฦ ๐ฑะฝั ๐ฯัฮฑgั ใโฌ๐พ๐๐ โฐ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐พ ใ๐ฏ๐
แดแดแด ษขแด ~ Rae_darling
๐ ๐๐ข๐ง๐ง๐๐ซ .แ
โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นThe Royal moon by lupe6583v๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Grammar - 9/10
Expressing - 8/10
Emotional Resonance - 8/10
Overall impact - 9/10
Clarity - 9/10
Total: 43/50
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โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นParth Probodhika: Pristine Hues by dwarkaratna๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Grammar - 7/10
Expressing - 8/10
Emotional Resonance - 8/10
Overall impact - 8/10
Clarity - 9/10
Total: 40/50
๐ 2๐ง๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ง๐ง๐๐ซ ๐๐ฉ .แ
โน เฃช ๏น๐๏นGo, die and come back by MustafaAsad6. ๐๏นโน เฃช ห
Grammar - 8/10
Expressing - 8/10
Emotional Resonance - 7/10
Overall impact - 8/10
Clarity - 7/10
Total: 37/50
๐บnce again, heartfelt ๐๐ค๐ฃ๐๐ง๐๐ฉ๐ช๐ก๐๐ฉ๐๐ค๐ฃ๐จ to all the winners! If you weren't selected this time, remember that what truly matters is your participation in the awards.
A big แดสแดษดแด สแดแด to all the judges for their invaluable cooperation, and to the participants for their patience as they awaited the results.
Regards ๐ชธ
๐ Founder jeonxfins
๐ Co-Founder bangtanholic_fics, rae_darling
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