My first and only love (Fred Weasley x Y/n Green)

PLEASE READ

Hi, so this is just a text I wrote for my english class and got an A on it. It's very short, but I wanted to share this with you guys to know what you think. I wanna know if it's bad or good or if there's anything I should add or change to make it better.

This is a "me" story, so it's like from your pov (just so you know)

PLEASE give me feedback

These characters are not mine (they are from Harry Potter), but I just made up Y/n's last name. Someone has probably already used that name, so I'm sorry.