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188: 206th diary entry annotated.
Next day
I have just enough paper and berry ink to write one more time. (Wow.) The morning bell will ring soon and I'll have to go to the fields. (14 words, good old bell.) There's time to write a few words. ( make the last entry decently fulfilling.) I have decided to begin with F-R-E-E-D-O-M. (7 words, the entire theme of this book.)
Freedom. I let the memory pictures take shape in my mind. (11 words, show us, tell us your new visual outlook of that word's meaning.) Mr. Harms is safe and able to go on with his work. (12 words, a really good thing.) Hince and Spicy are free and together. (7 words, you made sure they could have a happy ending together.) I remembered the little girl I'd helped the night before and I smiled. (13 words, it's such a good old wondrous feeling, indeed.) My doll Little Bit would be free before me. Freedom. (10 words, true.) I remembered what Mr. Harms had said about choices. (9 words, you always would.) I looked at the letters more closely. (7 words, she is reading real deeply now.) For the first time freedom showed me a clear picture. (10 words, oh yes!)
A picture of me. (4 words, true as can be.)
(The diary part has official end, but I like to think the epilogue is also a diary entry too at a way later date, so it is marked up as a diary entry. right below. And remember before P6 of these Continued Annotation chapters there were 23 diary entries listed from P2- P5 so I will give you the actual total number of diary entries that were in this tiny book.)
189: 207th diary entry annotated
The Epilogue
During the summer of 1939, when Clotee Henley was ninety-two years old, she was interviewed by Lucille Av-ery, a student at Fisk University, which is in Nashville, Tennessee. Miss Avery, along with many other writers, had been hired by the government to visit aging slaves and record their stories. Clotee's story first appeared in the Virginia Chronicle, summer 1940.
Miss Avery visited Clotee at her home in Hampton, Virginia. And for over two months, Clotee shared her diaries, photos, and papers. From Miss Avery's research, we know that Clotee served as a conductor on the Underground Railroad, helping over one hundred and fifty slaves get to freedom, and as a spy for the Union Army from 1862-1865. She was awarded commendation by General Ulysses S. Grant for her valor.
During the war however, life at Belmont changed forever. Briley Waith was at Fort Sumter with Edmund Ruffin, Sr., who fired the first shot. Mas' Henley lost an arm at the battle of Fredericksburg, and Miz Lilly went mad when Yankees camped on Belmont grounds and turned the Big House into a Union hospital. Aunt Tee used all her knowledge of roots and herbs to save the lives of soldiers, even when army doctors snickered and called it voodoo. They stopped laughing when she saved more lives than they did. Sadly, Aunt Tee died of cholera on Christmas Day 1864, months before the war ended. She was buried beside Uncle Heb in the plantation cemetery.
When Missy's mama died, she ran off and later married a Buffalo Soldier out West.
After the war, Mr. Harms arranged for Clotee to travel up North, where she received a hero's welcome. After several business failures, Mr. Harms moved to Scotland where he dropped out of sight. Although Clotee never met Sojourner Truth, she did meet Frederick Douglass, with whom she corresponded until his death in 1895.
In 1875, Clotee returned to Virginia, where she attended Virginia Colored Women's Institute, then dedicated her life to the education of former slaves, women's suffrage, equal rights, and justice for all people regardless of race, creed, or nationality.
Inside her diaries, Miss Avery found two other interesting items that help conclude Clotee's story. One was a photo and packet of letters from Dr. William Monroe Henley, who had become a professor of philosophy at Oberlin College in Ohio. He had been disinherited by his father for taking a stand against prejudice. "Through education Mr. Harms did more to destroy slavery than all the laws on the books could legislate," he wrote to Clotee in 1891.
There was another photo of a handsome elderly couple, surrounded by a large family. On the back was written:
To our beloved sister-friend,
Clotee from Hince and Rose Henley and family
50th Wedding Anniversary Louisville, Kentucky, 1910.
Spicy is holding a Bible in her hand, and Hince has a quilt folded over one knee. There is an old article from a Kentucky newspaper attached to the photo, praising Hince for being one of the finest horse trainers in the racing business.
Clotee never married or had children of her own, but when she died on May 6, 1941, hundreds of her former students attended the funeral. As a teacher she had challenged them. As an activist, she had inspired them. As a friend, she had encouraged them. Clotee Henley's legacy lives on in the epitaph engraved on her gravestone:
207 diary entries plus 23 entries
3+7 =10, but we have separated 1 and placed it over 2
207
+23
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230 diary entries totally in this book.
Not much for me to say I will do research for some of this stuff mentioned in the epilogue, but it is a well written third person perspective point of view. Something I see writers here struggle with on a day basis and yes South Carolina our still quite lawless neighbor of a State was the first to secede from the United States and begin the war. The state is still filled with many illegal problems to this day.
Historic Facts pages below.
Life in America 1859
The first Africans were brought to the Virginia colony as indentured servants in 1619. Slavery was a well-established institution in the United States by the 1850s. But the resistance against it was equally old and persistent.
Virginia legislators, who were often wealthy planters, took the lead in passing laws that safeguarded their rights as slaveholders, discouraged runaways, and protected themselves against insurrections. These laws were known as "Slave Codes" or "Black Codes." As a matter of record Virginia and other Southern states had hundreds of Slave Codes on their books. For example one stated that ... the status of the mother determined whether the child was born free or slave." Others forbade interracial marriages and outlawed the education of slaves. Blacks could not hold public meetings, or testify against a white man in court. Any slave suspected of running away was dealt with severely.
Resistance against slavery took many forms, beginning first with the captives themselves. They used work slow downs, arson, murder, suicide, and armed rebellion to gain their freedom. When they could run, most did. In fact, the runaway problem was always a pressing one for most slaveholders. As early as 1642, Virginia introduced a fugitive slave order that penalized all those who helped runaway slaves.
Even the United States Constitution contained a fugitive slave clause. Most slaves who managed to reach a free state could live as a free person. But with the passage of the revised Fugitive Slave Law of 1850, the government allowed slaveholders to go into free states and recapture their "property."
In 1854, Anthony Burns, a fugitive slave, was arrested and jailed in Boston, Massachusetts, but Bostonians attacked the federal courthouse and attempted to rescue him. Burns was returned to his master, but he was later freed. Burns' case, and others like his, brought the issue of slavery to the forefront.
As early as 1688, a group of Pennsylvania Quakers signed the "Germantown Mennonite Resolution Against Slavery." It was the first written document that protested slavery in the North American colonies and marked the beginning of a formalized abolitionist movement. Since that time, blacks and whites, men and women, Southerners and Northerners organized with the purpose of abolishing slavery. One of the largest and most effective of these organizations was the American Anti-Slavery Society, founded in Philadelphia in 1833. New York, Philadelphia, and Boston were the centers of the movement, but anti-slavery groups flourished all over the country.
William Lloyd Garrison and Frederick Douglass spoke out strongly against slavery. Women such as Harriet Beecher Stowe and Sojourner Truth also made an impact through their lectures and writing. Truth had been enslaved in New York, one of the last Northern states to abolish slavery. Stowe's book Uncle Tom's Cabin sold out its first printing in less than a week because people were fascinated by her depiction of slave life. Southerners tried to argue that the book was fiction, but people read it as fact.
To help runaways make the long and dangerous trip to freedom, often to Canada, abolitionists formed a network of people who served as "conductors" on an "under-ground railroad." It was not underground and it wasn't a railroad, but a route by which slaves were taken to freedom. Good and decent people — farmers, teachers, housewives, laborers, college presidents, and even children — risked heavy fines and imprisonment to take part in this dangerous venture. Some conductors were caught and served time in prison but nothing could stop people from running away from tyranny or assisting those who would try.
One of the best-known conductors on the Underground Railroad was Harriet Tubman, a fugitive slave.
Swing low, sweet chariot,
Comin' for to carry me home.
A band of angels comin' after me.
Comin' for to carry me home.
The words were coded. "Home" was freedom. The
"sweet chariot" was a wagon or some vehicle that they hoped would take them to freedom. The "band of an-gels" were the abolitionists. Slaves sang songs for many reasons. Often, their singing was misunderstood as a display of happiness and contentment.
The conditions under which a slave lived depended largely upon the personality of his master. Planters were the masters of their estates who conducted their affairs autonomously. Their wives, children, and slaves were under their authority and could be treated any way the planters chose within the limits of the law and the laws were always in the slaveholders' favor).
The End so now you know who are all the actual real life people in this story being mentioned, preciously sweet Skylights.
This book will remain one of my favorite historical non fiction books and I'm thrilled I could close this book of reference with such a miraculous telling of a time in the United States past history in which every single character we meet for more than one scene always has something new to surprise us to show us the author worked incredibly hard to flesh out every single one of the characters she put to the page too.
It is one of the best examples of good story writing when it comes to difficult situations and it does fit in with the last half of this book being about mythology the author pays acknowledgement to one of the most famous myths that have been around for years before 1860s the myth and stories of Heracles are what Harms reads to William at one point, so there was a theme with this accidentally obviously but it still worked despite having read this book three times through before now I still forgot that part existed.
So it is a happy coincidence honestly.
Other books in the Dear America Series are The Winter of Red Snow that occurs during the Revolutionary war for the United States, Skylights.
Survival In The Storm (The Texas Dustbowl occurs during the Great Depression) is another recommended Dear America Series book by me. And the other book recommend by a friend of mine is The one that occurs on the Titanic, Skylights.
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