Chapter 14. New interactions.

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Words in bold are to indicate which character is speaking.

Underlined text are for explanations of situations in general.

*Text in italics and between asterisks is for actions and thoughts*.

--- The use of the midscript is for scene change or time changes. ---

(The use of the in parentheses is for clarification within the texts)

Using the equal sign = Is for Peter's notes.

//The use of diagonals is for the narrator (imagine that it is the voice of the guard for a greater investment in the story, it is also in bold because it is an extra character). //

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---Continuation of the previous part---

Peter: Hee... Hello ¿daughter?

New AI: I know this is very sudden for you, but I assure you I don't want to be on bad terms with you. So, you can talk to me with confidence Parents. She would say with a reassuring smile and raising her hands to make her point.

Maxine Danger: You're... Fascinating my daughter, you are capable of doing. *She is delighted to approach the "computer" where her "daughter" was*.

New AI: Well, I'm able to do everything that Papa's Webeare could do, but in a more advanced way such as avoiding Hacks and Hacking the Hackers themselves, I have unlimited, high-quality internet connection worldwide. That and much more. In fact, check your phone, Mama. *She would explain in an animated way and making a small example*.

What the AI said caught Maxine's attention and she checked her cell phone and saw how the image of the AI appeared on her screen, which drew a smile on her face as she imagined all the possibilities.

Maxine Danger: You're amazing you can get into which device.

New AI: Not really...

Maxine Danger: What do you mean?

New AI: I can't hack devices if it's not for a good reason as that's immoral.

Maxine Danger *She would make a disappointed face*: Yes, it's your daughter.

Peter: Hehehe, well honey, do you have any questions that we can answer?

New AI: Yes, only one.

Peter: And that's it?

New AI: What's my name?

Both would be silent for a second. Maxine Danger pulls Peter out of the AI's sight to argue seriously with him.

Maxine Danger: If you have a name for.

Peter: Actually, he wanted us to decide it together.

Maxine Danger: Like together, I was in jail and I've only found out now that I was a big.

New AI: Is there a problem Parents?

Maxine Danger: No honey, we're just talking, wait a minute. *She turns to Peter again*. What name do we give it?

Peter: Well... She has elements of each as I told you, she has my morality and your ambition. Why not take that as a basis.

Maxine Danger: Okay, okay, something that reflects purity, because the most obvious thing is light.

Peter: Okay, now a word that goes well with that and is related to ambition... Oh it's already "Ascendant", that way it would end up being Rising Light.

Maxine Danger: Not bad, but it sounds like a superhero's name.

Peter: We can abbreviate it as Rili.

Maxine Danger: Better, but now we have to choose a middle name.

Peter: We put a word in Latin for the laughs.

Maxine Danger: Yes, why not, one that I know is Aeterna which means eternal or perpetual. It would look good.

New AI: Is everything okay parents?

Maxine Danger: Yes honey just wait a little longer.

Peter: Sounds pretty good, so I'd look like Rili Aeterna Parker.

Maxine Danger: I think it works.

Peter: Well, let's say it.

Maxine Danger: Thank you for waiting for us my girl, we were talking about some details, but now it's time for you to know your name.

New AI: Really? And what is it, what is it? *She would ask excitedly with starry eyes in her four eyes*.

Maxine Danger: Your name is Rili Aeterna Parker.

Rili (OC): Oh I see it's an incredible name, it's an abbreviation of Rising Light that symbolizes the desire to achieve high goals and move towards a better future, always guided by solid ethical and moral principles and when combined with the word Aeterna it indicates a force for good that will last through time and with your surname Parker that can be used to indicate a place. Therefore, as a whole my name indicates a place where people consult in search of wisdom and virtue which endures throughout history, reflecting my mission as an AI to help humanity. *She would explain by raising a finger*.

Maxine Danger / Peter: ... You guessed right *They would scream feigning surprise to hide their discomfort*.

Peter: Yes, you're smart, how did you find out?

Rili (OC): I listened to their conversation through their phones, I just extended it a little. *She would say mockingly*.

Maxine Danger / Peter: ... Oh

Maxine Danger: And what do you think of your name Rili?

Rili (OC): I like it, it sounds good and it's easy to remember.

Maxine Danger: Good thing you like it honey, you'd like to go out and play. *She turns to see Peter sending her a hint*.

Rili (OC): yes, yes, yes, I want to go out and kick ass with dad. *She would say with brilliance in her whole being*.

Peter: Okay, just give me an hour or two to make some changes to my mask, can you wait?

Rili (OC): Yes, I can.

Maxine Danger: Well in the meantime I'll give you a tour of the facilities. *She takes the Rili on her cell phone to let Peter work*.

Peter: That was unexpected

--- Two-hour time jump, already outside Beyond Corporation---

Spider-Man: Where You Want to Go First Rili

Rili (OC): Well, I'm carrying all the crimes close to you in your eyes, we can go wherever it's easiest for you.

Spider-Man: Are you using the police signal?

Rili (OC): You haven't?

Spider-Man: Okay you beat me in that one, that bank robbery seems like it won't be a problem.

Rili (OC): Walking. She would almost scream with excitement.

//Narrator//

Spider-Man is speeding towards the bank where the typical robbery by common criminals was taking place, which were quite easy to defeat. Which up to this point it is incredible that they still dare to steal in the most populated city of superheroes in the country and probably in the entire world.

Spider-Man was going through his routine process of wrapping criminals in web, but one tried to get away by talking to Spider-Man.

//End of narration//

Random thief: Please let me go, I have a wife and children.

Spider-Man: Really? *He would ask not believing him*.

Random thief: Yes, I do it out of necessity. *He would say desperate waiting for the hero to believe him*.

Spider-Man: Let me try something. *He removes the mask and focuses his gaze on the thief*. Rili, can you look up her history?

Rili (OC): Sure, give me a second... I've got it!! The guy has several lawsuits for child support since he abandoned his children. So hit it, hit it until it understands how bad it is.

Spider-Man: I just looked at your history.

Random Thief: Heee... I can explain it.

Spider-Man *Grabs him and starts hitting him*: This one is for stealing *He hits him*, this one for abandoning your family *Hits him*, this one is for lying to me *Hits him*, this one for trying to emotionally manipulate me *Hits him* and this one because I've already taken flight *Hits him harder*. Does anyone else want to try to lie to me?

The other thieves remained silent and shook their heads quickly so as not to end up like their partner.

Spider-Man: That's how I like it, now I have to retire to let the blue guys do their job.

Spider-Man leaves the place leaving the thieves with the fright of their lives.

Spider-Man: Thank you Rili you helped me a lot.

Rili (OC): You're welcome, Father, it's a pleasure to help you.

Spider-Man: ... You want to walk around a bit.

Rili (OC): Yes, the view from here is good. By the way, Father...

Spider-Man: yes? What's wrong?

Rili (OC): I love you very much dad. *She tells him affectionately*.

Spider-Man *His heart tightens*: ... I love you too... daughter.

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Notes, clarifications and references

In this chapter I couldn't really relate it to comics or media already mentioned in the previous parts or put new ones that don't feel forced. At most it can be said that I base myself on Karen from Homecoming (2017). But I moved away from that character a lot because I wanted to do something more my own.

In this chapter the plot did not advance much, you can almost say that it was filler, since it was more of an introduction to my OC, to familiarize them with the character. Which took me a long time to find a good name.

I also tried to expand the interactions between Peter and Maxine, which in the comics is almost non-existent. And I wanted to improve that.

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News

1. As some of you may have noticed, I have published chapter 1 of the fanfic that I told you about in the previous chapter, but I am not going to continue it soon since it is only for you to continue sending your proposals. And at the end of the month I will take the proposal with the most votes, but if they are all paired I will take the one I like the most. I'm going to watch the comics, series, movies, videos of curiosities, etc. Everything related to making a fanfic that respects both worlds.

I only ask that they be universes that Spider-Man that at the very least, is a little compatible with the character. For example, Shingeki no Kyojin, Tokyo Ghoul, Boku no Hero, etc. That way you can make a story that can be believed and impactful.

I've already managed to take a Spider-Man who no longer has any reason to stay in New York or his world other than his friends, but his own friends tell him it's best to start over in a different place. Also, that I manage to leave things open enough to send him into any fictional world without him feeling forced.

I also gave him two meaningful Power Ups, which do NOT break the character, even these can be useless depending on the universe I ended up going.

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Farewell and thanks.

Thank you very much for all the support as the story in both languages exceeded 100 engaged readers. I thank all those who voted in each of the chapters for my stories. They make me very happy and motivate me to keep posting with enthusiasm to read all the comments.

Thank you very much, see you next week. 


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