I know this isn't Harry Potter related, but I just wanted to post this. So here you go. Also if you see this in another account, it's my other account called
Last thing is that I made this a LONG time ago, so a lot of the story is very cringe and hard to watch without barfing.
WARNING: CRINGE, MENTIONS OF S3X, SWEARING!
Warning: Language (specifically for the last chapter)
The beginning-ish?
Queen Susan
Oh god I hate that name. But everyone else loves it. Love her. She's practically perfect. And then I'm over here looking like a dwarf with the most traumatizing face you'd ever see. Let me be honest, I never felt like this to Susan before, so Susan doesn't really notice my hate towards her. The reason is because, well, about a man, more like a Telmarine, named Prince, or more like King Caspian. He likes Susan, which makes me, just, want to leave Narnia, where he wouldn't exist, and live life. But I can't cause Narnia's to bring me, and the other Pevensies, back to England. So now I'm stuck here till we kill Miraz, Caspian's crazy uncle. As I was thinking about stuff, Susan taps my shoulder, "Hey! Y/n! Wake up!" I blink and look at Susan, I fake smile and wave slightly, and say to her, "What?" She tells me that she just wants to wake me up. I was not even asleep. Okay, I know it's not fair to hate on her just because a guy likes her, and not me. But, I just, it's hard to explain. But to sum that, I know that I'm being selfish, but I can't help it. Then, the one and only, King Caspian the tenth with High King Peter and Just King Edmund arrive, which makes me make an excuse to leave. I go straight out to a nice tree. The tree was growing apples, which reminds me that I feel so hungry, but I excuse my hunger and start to cry. I try to stop, but as soon as I can't, I let all my tears flood down. I don't want to hate Susan, but I have no choice. Well I do, but it's hard not too. She's perfect, but, it's, like, too perfect. "Susan, I don't want to hate her, but, I- I feel too overshadowed by her!" I continue crying, it sucks to feel this way, but I can't handle it, I need to cry more so I don't cry once I get back. I start to stand up, and once I do, I wipe my eyes and my nose and then start to go back. Once I come back, the others were gone. So I start to go my way to the tents, until someone stops me. "Y/n." I stop and look back. King Caspian. "What do you want?" I ask him, trying to keep back tears. He looks at me, a very stern face. "Why are you always avoiding me? Please, it makes me feel guilty, like I did something wrong. Y/n, did I do something wrong? Please be honest." I look at him, his sincere face, all the guilt he looks. "What do you mean?" He sighs, "Don't try to avoid the question, Y/n Y/m/n (if you have one) Y/l/n, what did I do wrong?" I start to tear up, "Look! If you want to know, here it is! You like Susan, while I'm just there wondering when you notice me more than just a friend! I feel selfish, but I can't control it!" Oh shoot, why did I say that? I cover my mouth and start to leave, until he starts to chuckle. "Just imagine I didn't say anything." He comes to me and holds my hands. "Well, now that you say that, I want to confess something," he continues, "well, first, I did like Susan." I interrupt, "So? I'm right! You do like Susan! Please, just-" He stops me, "She told me we're just friends. She didn't feel the same way, which of course, hurt me. But when you are with me, I remember how you always were there when I was mad, sad, happy, you are always there. Then I realized, you were the one." I look at him, plainly, "Is this some joke, Susan, or Edmund dared you to do. Well, I'm not deceived." He all of a sudden kisses me. It felt, well, I don't know how to describe it, but let's say, amazing. I didn't want it to stop, but once it did, I bite my lip. He smiles, and then he hugs me, and I hug him back. "I love you, Y/n. Not Queen Susan, you." I smile a small smile, "Well, just promise me this isn't some joke." Caspian replies, with a smirk, "I, King Caspian the tenth, promise with my life, that I love you, and this is no joke." But now I remember, suddenly, "Wait, but won't you have some arranged marriage with another lady, or man? But-" He sighs, which causes me to stop. "Look, yes, I will have an arranged marriage, but I swear, you're the only one I love, and when I get married, I will make sure you are my bride, understand?" I doubt this. I know that he will marry another lady, or man. "But-" Out of nowhere, he puts a finger to my mouth, and says, "Shhh, honey, we'll think of that soon." He then winks, which makes me smile and blush. 'Who knew this Telmarine was such a jokester?' I think to myself. By then, he takes me by the arm to go to another tent, to which we do stuff, um, yeah...
Some fun ending!
As we both are waking up, all four Pevensies are looking at us curiously. "Sooo?" I blush with embarrassment. "Well, um, yeah..." Caspian's doesn't seem shy and says, "Well, finally I got the girl. The girl of my dreams." I roll my eyes, "How bout Susan?" She looks at me, her head tilting, "I rejected him! He's all yours!" I smile, 'Why did I hate you, Susan?' Lucy then whispers loudly, "I'll understand when I'm older." Edmund says back, "I'm older and I don't want to understand!" I start to laugh and soon everyone starts laughing. Afterwards, they let us change, but then I realize. 'I should talk to Susan.' I leave Caspian with a kiss, and go back to Susan, who was using her bow and arrow. "Hey, Susan, can we talk?" She nods, thankfully, and we go to the apple tree, the same one that I cried a flood at. "So, what's up, Y/n. Are you good?" I nod, but tell her, "Look, this seems odd for me to tell you this, but I'm sorry. I am sorry I was jealous of you, and thinking of you badly. I was just being selfish for wanting Caspian all to myself. You don't deserve to be thought of badly, and you are a wonderful person. So I'm sorry, and can you please forgive me?" Susan looks shocked once I finish that sentence, and she hugs me. "You deserve him. That's why I, well, declined him. I know that you and him are perfect for each other. It hurt me, but it was for the better." She liked him too! God, that's surprising. Especially for a woman like Susan. "And yes, I forgive you." We break the hug, and I smile at her. Not a fake smile, a real smile, a true smile. She smiles back, well, more like a grin. We go back to her training, and I try doing some archery (and failing).
The almost final ending
Susan looks at me, I look at her back. She's not allowed in Narnia anymore, since she's too old, as Aslan says. Also Peter is too old, of course, he's the oldest Pevensie sibling. I sit beside Susan, and it seems as if she's bored. "I'm going to a party-" She says, but I stop her. "Nope, you're not going to a party, since I'm gonna to tell you a story. A Narnian love story, between a woman and a Telmarine." Susan seems excited, and I tell her the story. At the end, she looks at me. "What happened, did they get married?" I reply, "No, they didn't," Susan starts to look sad, "No, not yet." And that makes her smile, not her party, drunk smile, her Narnian smile. That smile she smiled the day that I told her 'the truth'. Susan then asks me, "Who are the people in the story?" It hurts me to hear the word, 'story' and say it, but I tell her, "Two lovers who love each other." She bites her lip, "I wish I could have a love story like that." I secretly think, 'If only you'd stop going to parties and getting drunk', but instead, I smile, "You'll find a way." She then questions, "Do you know when this Caspian, Telmarine is coming for the woman?" I sigh, "When he's ready..." She nods, with a grin, "Interesting, do you know this girl?" I say to her, "Well, sorta, if that makes sense." Susan nods in agreement. "Well, I hope that he comes to get her soon." I think blissfully, 'I hope so too...'
The final ending
"Now, times have changed, but my feelings have not. How's that?" I ask Susan, and she smiles, "Not bad, Y/n. But why is it always about love?" I roll my eyes, and she sighs, "Fine, don't tell me." I look at her, "Well, okay. I won't tell you, anyways, that's better news for me." She shrugs, and I laugh. "Well, I better get going, don't want to be late to Lucy's crazy baking catastrophe. I go to Lucy, who is also with Edmund, who are both, I believe, trying to make a cake. "Hey, what's up you guys! How are you doing so far?!" They roll their eyes at me and scoff, "Like you can do any better." I'm offended. "I can do 100 times better than you both!" Now it's their turn to be offended. "How could you say that, we're doing wonderfully!" I sigh, "If you say so." I leave them and check Peter. "What are you doing?" He ends a call. "Nothing, why?" I roll my eyes at him, "I know you have a girlfriend, why are you so shy? It's okay to have a girlfriend, it's not a crime, and Narnia will be so happy if they find out that High King Peter has a girlfriend." He smiles, "True." I leave him be, and I remember Caspian. "Is he truly going to marry me?" Once then, a man, pretty short, comes up to me and asks, "Are you Y/n Y/l/n?" I look at the man, "Why yes I am. Why do you ask?" The man tells me, "You must go back to Narnia." I'm shocked by the news. "Wait, but I'm already too old for Narnia. Aslan said so." The man avoids what I tell him and he says to me, "We've been looking for you everywhere, and at last, we've found you!" Me, still in confusion, asks, "What do you need me for?" The man replies, "You must marry King Caspian." Wait, what? "Wait, really? But-" The man then shushes me, "No excuses, into the mirror you go!" All of a sudden, I get sucked inside a mirror, and land inside Narnia, I think. "Huh, why am I here? Oh well, I am about to marry Caspian. But this must be a joke." Just then, a man looks at me and asks, "Miss, are you alright?" I look at the man. Wait- that isn't a man, it's a centaur! "I'm fine, thank you?" The centaur says back, "Ramer, and you?" I reply back, getting up, "Y/n." He then, suddenly, brings me to a castle, and I keep asking, "What are you doing?!" Ramer continues and when we finally arrive, he answers, "Didn't that dwarf tell you why you're here?" I look at the centaur, and question, "He said about me marrying King Caspian." Ramer winks, "Exactly! You're finally going to marry the love of your life!" I didn't think of that. But wait, they could be lying. "Are you sure you aren't some bad centaur, and you're trying to kill me?" He looks so offended after, that I apologize a million times. He then brings me to some ladies, and they start to dress me up. The ladies' names are Fattema, Fiona, and Sophia. They all were very beautiful, and have wonderful talents. When they finally finish, they all have their jaws dropped. "Omg, you're so beautiful!" They all flatter at the same time. I thank them, and they bring me to this ceremony, where the one and only, King Caspian is. I blush, hard. He didn't look totally the same, but he sure still looks hot. "Go!" Fattema whispers to me, and I listen. "Now, the bride!" I walk out, looking at Caspian the same time. His jaw completely drops once he sees me, and I blush yet again. Then I realize, 'I didn't get to practice any vows', but I try my best to keep calm, and I walk up to Caspian. "Now, King Caspian the tenth and Y/n Y/m/n (if you have one) Y/l/n, do you love each other?" We both reply I do. "Will you both stick together no matter what happens?" We both reply I do. Every question we reply I do. And finally, the priest (I think) says, "King Caspian the tenth, you may now kiss your bride!" He swoops me and kisses me, and I kiss back. "I love you." He says. "I love you more." Wait, I just hope that dwarf says that I'm visiting the Pevensies sometimes (sadly it's going to be pretty tiring).
This is not technically an ending, but but here it is
I stay in Narnia for a while, and once I feel like visiting England, the dwarf (whose name is Nanus) just sucks me inside a mirror, and I fall into a place in the Pevensies house where no one's there. Smart. Why in the bathroom? Is there really not another place I can land in? I sigh and go out, where the Pevensies are doing their things. I go to Edmund and Lucy, who are trying to convince Peter to eat the, um, soup? Cake batter? "Eat it!" Lucy says, forcing a spoon inside his mouth. "No! Lu, I'm not testing it out!" Edmund rolls his eyes, "Whatever Lu, he doesn't want to try." Me, wanting to help them, I guess, says, "I'll try." All of them, in surprise, let me try the batter. And when I do, it doesn't taste that good. Okay, it doesn't taste at all. "There's no taste." The others, specifically Lucy and Edmund are shocked. I leave them, saying they find the right recipe for the batter. I go to Susan, who looks ready for a party. High heels, a very short dress, lipstick, and her hair done pretty neatly. "Hey, Y/n." I wave, and I say, "Look, do you remember that story I told you about the Telmarine and the woman? The Narnian love story?" Susan nods, "Why do you say that? They didn't end up together." I smile, "Well, they actually did end up together." Susan replies, "Really, why didn't you say so?" I answer, "Cause they just got married recently." Susan questions, "How do you know about this?" I shrug. She sighs. "That love would be beautiful..." I smile, "Yes it is."
Baby (a short chapter?)
In Narnia, it's peaceful. I know it's random to say that, but really. No white witch, or crazy uncle. Me and Caspian have been married for 2 years, and it's like a dream. And if it is, please don't wake me up. I go to Caspian and ask him, "What are you doing?" He looks at me, putting on the most innocent face, "Nothing," I sigh, but laugh at the same time, "Okay, tell me." He tells me that he is cooking, which makes me try not to laugh. "Okay... Well, how's it going?" Caspian replies, "Perfectly...?" I give him 'the look', and he gulps. "Well, um, it's not going too well." I go straight to the kitchen, to where the steak (most likely) is burnt. I start to chuckle, "Okay, it's alright. I'll just clean-" Caspian answers, "Well, I made the mess, so I'll clean." I roll my eyes at him. "You sure?" He looks at me. I can see that he isn't sure. So I let the maid help us, and we say we're sorry about this, and then go to the room. "Well, we're alone." I smile, as I bite my lip, "Yeah, we are. But Roweena." Roweena is the maid. He rolls his eyes, "Hm...?" I sigh as I kiss him softly, and he starts to get intense, and then it's an entire make out session. When we finish, we look at each other and laugh. I have to admit, it felt good. The next morning, Roweena asks us, "How come I kept on hearing very loud moans upstairs?" We say that it was kinda private, and thankfully, she respects our privacy. Caspian whispers to me, "Want to do it again later?" I look at him, and plainly nod. We excuse ourselves after dinner and, well, the make out session begins yet again. After some time, I start to feel sick. I keep vomiting, and my stomach hurts too much. I keep going to the bathroom every, like, five minutes. And I start to feel so tired. And the worst of all, I miss my period. I decide to check a pregnancy test, and, by shock, to me, it is two lines. Shit, I'm pregnant. Well, Caspian will be so happy to hear this news. I go to him once I finish the test, and ask him, "Do you want a child?" He says yes, and I show him the test. "Huh? What is this supposed to mean?" I explain to him that two lines mean that I'm pregnant. He goes wide eyed, and faints. "Oh goodness." I say, massaging my temples. He leaves, to some random place, and he comes back with supplies. Oh, wait. How am I supposed to visit England? Fuck. I go to Nanus and say to him, "Nanus, if you may. Can you please tell the Pevensies that I'm not visiting them for a while." He nods, but questions, "Wait. How come?" Then that's when Caspian shouts, "I'm going to be a father!" Nanus goes wide eyed. "I'm telling them right away." I tell him not to tell them that I'm pregnant, and he agrees. "Thank you, Nanus." He smiles, and goes inside the mirror. I go to Caspian and say, "You're excited." He raises his eyebrows, "Of course I am, who do you think I am!?" I laugh, "My husband, the love of my life, a Telmarine, King Caspian the tenth." After some time (some months), I'm walking, until I feel something happen, and I call Fattema, Fiona, and Sophia, and they come straight away. "What's wrong, Queen?" They realize that the water broke, and since they know what that means, they help me walk straight to an empty room (Rainbow7000: ofc with a bed and a table and other stuff, we're not that weird), and they set me on the bed. Those few minutes, I remember, barely. I fall asleep, so I don't really know what's happening. And once I wake up, Caspian's there beside me, holding the baby. "The baby is so cute." I say, and he hears me. "I know, he got that from you." I smile, "So, what are we naming, him?" He nods, "He's a boy." We both try to think of names until Caspian says, "How about Caspian? Like my name?" I consider it, "Well, so his name will be Caspian the eleventh?" He nods. "Well, that's nice. He is officially, Prince Caspian the eleventh."
(Rilian: Where am I?
Me: You don't exist Rilian
Rillian: How come?
Me: Cause I have no clue how they'd possibly think of the name, Rillian
Rillian: Well, how about Caspian the eleventh, that's a pretty bad name
Me: *rolls eyes*
Rillian: Hey, no one rolls their eyes at the king!)
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