Name: Sahara

aight 

Age: 6

kay

Gender: Female

nothing to say here

Tribe: Hivewing SandWing

oOOOOOO INTERESTING

Appearance: SandWing with forked tail barb and some golden and black scales like random spots

I LOVE THE FORKED BARB IDEA idk why tho. she sounds super pretty

Rank: student

aight

Family: Qibli and Honeycomb (don't ask okay lol)

.... um, I won't? but for clarification I don't think making your oc a child of a canon is a good idea

Friends: Darkshine, Lightshine, Indigo, Cascade, Rosebud, Stormchaser, Sunny

love the names!

Enemies: Igloo, Hurricane, Queen Wasp

eugh. Wasp is awful.

Abilities: Can breathe fire and has venomous tail barb, okay in fighting.

pretty good

Weakness: too violent, insecure

needs more weaknesses. 

Backstory: She was born and raised on pantala with her mother cause Qibli didn't know he had a daughter, and then came to pyrrhia and went to JMA. Boom.

UM?? couple of questions -

one: WHEN did Honeycomb the HIVEWING:

- arrive in Pyrrhia

- meet Qibli

- Befriend Qibli

- Have a one-night stand with Qibli

- LEAVE AGAIN

- WHILE PREGANANANT

two: HOW did Qibli not know he was the father? How did he even find out he had a daughter? DID THEY ALL JUST GO OVER TO MAURY'S LIKE "QIBLI, IN THIS CASE, YOU ARE THE FATHER"???!??! IM SO CONFUSED

OVERALL SCORE:

7.9 / 10

would give 9 / 10, but im so confused. how in the Hundred Year Star did Honeycomb leave Pantala unnoticed, arrive in Pyrrhia without making a big fuss, find Qibli, befriend Qibli, get pregananant, get tweeted back into Pantala without anyone questioning where she went for like three years, have her daughter, get tweeted back to Pyrrhia AGAIN WITHOUT ANYONE QUESTIONING IT, ALL WHILE QIBLI NOT EVEN KNWOING WHAT THE ACTUAL SHELL WAS GOING ON?? Of all things, why didn't Qibli question where Honeycomb had gone? After he did the pip-diddly-do with her? I have so many questions.

PLEASE ELABORATE ME AND ORYX ARE BOTH SO CONFUSED