Chapter 9 : The Mind Controller

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Author's Note : 

Oh God ..... If you all can't tell .... i am so excited for this chapter . Hopefully i can deliver it perfectly . This is it .

   This is it ladies and gentlemen . The moment y'all have been waiting for . TO Find out who the villain is and what's the plot of this story . 

Now before hand warning ....... This book and it's characters are different than the original Book . So anything can happen . They are smarter as well.

  This chapter is gonna be chaotic and stressful af. As the title suggests.....

And oh boy are y'all in for a surprise . My big plot twist is revealed ....

ENJOY :)

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     Aidan's POV :

             I was sitting on the couch with y|n who was on a wheel chair cause she was too tired to walk and Marcy who couldn't stop commenting on how adorable our kids were .

           Speaking of them , my three little angels were sleeping in their respective cots soundly without a care in the world.

          I kissed Y|n on the lips and just like always felt the electricity flow through me . This love was real their was no denying that .

         I had yet to tell her about the fact that some creeps were mind controlling us..... and could do whatever they want with us .

       But i didn't want to stress her more cause she literally just gave birth to our three little angels. 

    I hope the others aka my other family can find this Allison and Ricky in time . According to Asher those two had gone missing . The moment they realized what was happening to the world.

MEANWHILE.................

          General POV :

                 Detective Reginald Herb sat at his desk . He was smoking his cigarette and he inhaled the smoke throw his nostrils and watched it exhale throw the air along his brown hair .

           He was a muscular man for a detective and aged in his 30s . He had been trying to catch the serial killer that was killing in USA . His latest or rather last kill was a girl named Millie.

          After that the killer had disappeared without a trace . And it's been a year almost .

        Reginald wanted to catch this guy bad. He was risking his entire career for this. He had a theory that almost 400 of the murders that happened in the recent years were linked together .

       But no one believed him .

     He sighed . All of a sudden his phone began to rang . Reginald picked it up with a huff and annoyed considering he wasn't in the mood right now . But oh boy was he rewarded .

    A unknown girl probably in her teens or early adulthood was on the phone based on her voice . The girl said : "Is this Detective Reginald ?"

  "Yes, speaking ." he replied .

   "Detective don't bother asking me who i am and why i know what i am about to tell you." the girl said .

  "okay ??" he said confused .

 " I know you are searching for the killer responsible for Millie's death. and i know who he is . And he hasn't just killed Millie. He's killed over 500 people . I know about the top secret death in river dale as well." The girl replied .

    Reginald shot up from his chair . This was most definitely not a prank call. This was legit.

 "Okay. You have my attention now. Whose the killer ?!" he asked anxiously.

 "His name is Aidan Gallagher. Yes he's alive and currently in New York city about 10 minutes away . You can go arrest him." the girl said .

   "Wait what ?!?! How do you eve..." he was cut off by the girl "i said no questions detective".

"alright. but at least tell me your first name " he replied .

"Allison" the girl replied and the line was cut off.

'Well i will be damned . Time to arrest this m**her f****er" he thought with a grin.

Aidan's POV :

     I was cooking strawberry cheesecake for y|n cause why not . And i was gonna propose to her . I took out the diamond ring and smiled.

    I went to the living room and saw Y|n talking with Marcy . 

   I put the cake in the corner and then knelt down on one knee behind them.

  Marcy saw me and squealed . and that led to y|n seeing me and she jumped right out of her chair and screamed .

   I smiled and said : "Y|n L|n will you Marry me ?"

   Y|n had tears in her eyes. She was about to respond when all of a sudden *BAM*

Several cops barged inside the house waking up my kids and they started to cry . The cops tackled me to the ground and said : "Aidan Gallagher you are under the arrest for Mass Murder at First Degree . You Have the right to stay silent . Anything you do or say will be used against you ,"

   Y|n and Marcy were crying and screaming as well . This was a nightmare. This had to be . But reality was a b****.

   I was dragged out of the house forcefully. Marcy tried to stop the cops but they held her down as well.

   Y|n ran after me but a cop slapped her across the face and then kicked her. and she fell to the ground hard.

     All of a sudden i felt sudden burst of anger inside me and my eyes turned dark . The cops noticed my serial killer mode and before i could do or say something they used their electric teazers and i fell to the ground out of breath .

   I looked at Y|n. She was screaming and crying she was saying .


"No please stop ... no please he didn't do anything ... stop please." she begged.

The same cop slapped her again .*SLAP* and i felt my blood boiling beyond the sun's heat.

  Then a couple of cops started to kick me and when y|n saw this and she immediately got up and screamed saying .

"I SAID STOP!!!!!!"

   And then all of a sudden everyone and i mean everyone stopped moving. Even the cats and birds literally froze . And then i noticed that even i was frozen . I couldn't move my eyes, body or even my mouth.

    Even Marcy was frozen . But then i noticed their eyes , they were milky white.

  Y|n's eyes were dark and she said "LEAVE . YOU ALL FORGOT ANY OF THIS EVER HAPPENED INCLUDING AIDAN'S IDENTITY."

   And then y|N grabbed a gun and smacked the guy who slapped her and the guy fell down while bleeding from his head but he didn't move nor scream , he was just frozen,then y|n stepped aside and looked at the other cops who like zombies picked up the guy and got in their cars , then all the cops left without a word and drove off . 

      Y|n then sighed and said : "Let's do this again". As if this didn't even happen.

   And then all of a sudden Marcy and I started walking back to the house against our own will.

   y|n sat on the couch and Marcy sat where she was before and i was back to kneeling down.

     Y|n looked at me with teary eyes and said : "Yes Aidan i do. Forever and Always."

   I felt tears coming down my eyes . But this time it wasn't because i wanted to. It was because y|n was making me.

       I looked at Marcy who squealed again . She without a doubt had no memory of what just happened. Only i remembered for some reason. But y|n thinks i don't and i plan to keep it that way .

   Cause now i knew without a doubt that Y|n was the Mind Controller. She was the one controlling the world . She was the one who stole the 15 map keys from TSO and she was the one controlling the world......................

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         CLIFFHANGER 

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Author's Note :

Hi readers !

If you can't tell i am smirking with smirk all knowing grin.

Plot twist of the century LAMOOO HAHAHA *evil witch laugh*

Bet you all didn't see that coming .

Yes Y|n is the villain (kinda) of the story and the one controlling the world .

Anyways how was the chapter and the plot twist ?

Hope y'all enjoyed it :)

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That's all ! See you soon !
BYE !!!!!
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