Chapter 18: All Out Rumble (Rewrite)

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"Something feel weird..." Shirou uttered.

Walking through the hall of Chaldea, it was for the first time in his life in Chaldea, that it was normal, a calm and soothing sensation that he had long felt. There was no more explosion or destruction that eas either cause by him, or directly related to him. It was peace, a moment that he had long felt, and he like such moment.

"No more paper works, and destruction, this is nice," Shirou smiled.

For now, he want to have sometimes to relax by himself, first he need to hesd to the cafetaria, where he need to do his usual job. Once that was done, maybe he can visit some other places in Chaldea, that he haven't visited yet. The market area should be nice, for searching for materials for his food and weapons. Maybe he can find a hobby there, or just sell his stuff that he don't need.

But for now, he want to finsihed his first job, that was feeding the Artoria's, as he was already near the cafetaria, he can see the door.

"Maybe my luck, have improved," Shirou smiled.

Sadly, his words come to bite him back, as once he was about to walk pass the door, someone suddenly fly out of the door, smashing the wall infront of the cafetaria. The sudden act, cause Shirou to fall in alert, as he quickly head toward the injured person. To his suprise, it was none other than Cu Chulainn, who was burried under rubbles of semen and iron.

"You alright?" Shirou asked.

"Yeah, not exactly," Cu pop his head out of the rubble, as he scratch the back of his head. "Hey, is that you kid?"

"Uh... Yeah?" Shirou reply.

"Then get your ass! Out of here!" Cu shouted.

Suddenly, a furniture was thrown directly toward Cu, it was a microwave, and it manage to hit him in the head, and send him unconcous. Shirou quickly turn his head to the source of the of the furniture, to his suprise, another person was thrown out from the cafetaria again. The next one, was none other than Mysterious Heroine X, who landed straight through Cu.

"X!" Shirou said in alert.

"Yo, Shirou!" Mysterious Heroine X said with a hazzy head.

"What happened?" Shirou asked

"Dammit! Shirou, you need to go, now!" Mysterious Heroine X shouted, before she pass out.

"What the hell, is happening?" Shirou uttered with a low tone.

Being the hot head he is, he didn't even take Mysterious Heroine X warning, and walk into the cafetaria. There he saw it, there was an all out rumble happening inside of the cafetaria, and most of the servants he knew, particapate in the rumble.

"You aren't getting out of here, alive!" Ishtar shouted.

As she was about to fire a Gandr, a sword hit her stomach, and send her flying toward Shirou. Who caught her on mid air, there he saw it, that Ishtar entire body was injured in but not in a bad state.

"Rin! What the heck is happening?" Shirou asked.

"Huh?" Ishtar saw the person who caught her was Shirou, she snap out her daydream. "Emiya? Why are you here!?"

"Well, I'm taking a break," Shirou reply.

"Whatever! You need to get out of here now!" Ishtar shouted.

"That voice!" A familiar female voice filled with auhtority call out.

After hearing that voice, multiple golden portals then appear around the cafetaria, as golden chains then shot out, and wrap around everyone that had particapate in the rumble. Slowly, from the midst of the crowd, a powerful stomp of iron boot walk out, and that spund was very familiar to Shirou, especially with the golden portals.

"That portal..." Shirou uttered out in alert.

He let go of Ishtar who landed on the ground with her butt, hearing the footstep getting closer, Shirou summon his Noble Phantasm in his hand. Ready to lung himself to the person, he might know, and the one who cause all of this mess to begin with.

"Ah, there you are," a voice of a glad female woman call Shirou out.

Once she take her step out of the midst of crowd, and reveal himself, Shirou can only gawk upon the figure that he is seeing right now. It was a female version of Gilgamesh, his worst enemy, and nemesis ever since in the Grail War, and in Chaldea. He couldn't believe nor fathom, what he had saw right now.

"Hm..." Once female Gilgamesh stop infront of Shirou, she take a moment to inspect his choice of clothing. "Odd choicr of armament, and clothing. But, it doesn't shy away, upon the battle you have particapate in, not bad. But, it's not good enough, if you want to impress your Queen!"

"What?" The only word that Shirou can let out, in his current situation.

"Are you deaf? Have you not heard, that your Queen is complimenting your choice of clothing? Or are you not familiar with me?" Female Gilgamesh take a closer look to Shirou face.

"Well, yeah... I'm not the person, that you knew," Shirou reply with an awkawrd voice.

"I see... Seems like your not the version that have conection with me," female Gilgamesh rubbed her chin. "Tell me, who is the servant, that you have summon in your Grail War?"

"It was Saber," Shirou didn't even hesitate to answer that question.

"Saber... That female form of King Arthur? I see, well, I might have bad relationship with her male counterpart, and that counterpart being summoned in his Lancer form," female Gilgamesh start to remember her old day back in the Grail War. "No wonder, why I still possessed such bad hatred agaisnt his female counterpart. Who could've wonder,"

"I could wonder!" Artoria shouted with malice in her words.

"Shush!" Female Gilgamesh chained Artoria mouth with Enkidu. "The Queen is speaking here, know your place,"

"Artoria!" Shirou shouted in alert.

He was about to flung himself toward Artoria to rescue her, but the golden chains known as Enkidu, wrap around Shirou entire body, and restrict his entire movement.

"Sieze your reckless act, are you trying to anger your Queen?" Female Gilgamesh asked.

"Your not even my Queen!?" Shirou reply.

"Well," female Gilgamesh crouch down, and press her finger around Shirou chin. "Your about to learn, on how you should treat your Queen soon,"

"STOP!" Shirou declared.

The sudden declaration force female Gilgamesh body to stop, she can't even move her finger, as a powerful force was tying her up and forcing her to listen to Shirou word.

Ruler Authority (A)

An absolute method that is used to assert one dominance, a way for him, to rule anyone that fall under the record of the Throne of Heroes. With this skill, that was given to him by the original Grand Ruler, he can mostly control each servants out of their free will, but there are limit to this skill.

"Tch! You dare to order your Queen? There are limit for your boldness!" Female Gilgamesh growled.

Even with her body being restricted by Shirou skill, her ego was never stopped by the skill. Through the use of her own ego, and Independent Action, as she cut her ties with her master for a moment. She force her body to be free from Shirou skill, as a small golden portal appear above her. A dagger fall down, which she caught in mid air, a zig zag dagger in a beautiful purple color, and she then stab the dagger straight to Shirou chest.

The sudden attempt, force Shirou passive skill to activate, as two armor knight appear beside him, and block the dagger from making contact with his skin. Female Gilgamesh saw them, but she didn't even care about them, with two golden portal appear above them. Swords shot down, and destroy them, it was a weak and nameless weapon, that was turned into a knight that can't even think, as he can't summon his own name weapons because of the situation he is currently involved.

More than one knight will appear, and there is a high chance that the giant knight will also appear. Those guys reach a high of 15 meter in short, and if they ended up coming here, the entire cafetaria will get destroyed. It was a risky move, and he decide to play the gamble, blue lines then spread through the ground from his body. Two knight then appear before him, as both of them, soon attack female Gilgamesh once they had come to the real world.

A knight clad in fur and bronze, this one was heavily armor between the others knight that had been summoned, with a face being cover in a viking helmet, and holding a giant blund red mace like sword. The second was a knight, that wore the least armor between the two, as the second one. Only wore a white robes, with some armor covering his body, and with the face being cover in a white veil, that had the symbol of sword imprinted on it. Holding a long black and purple sytche in it's hand.

"Harpe, and Naegling," female Gilgamesh thought.

One is an anti-divine weapon, and the other is a anti-giant weapon, that can crush anything in it's path.

"My liege!" Harpe call out.

"Focus on her! I can free myself," Shirou commanded.

"As you wish!" Naegling then swung it's true body toward female Gilgamesh.

Using enchanted strenght, Shirou force his body to lossen the hold of the golden chains of Enkidu. As he doesn't possessed enough strenght, to destroy a Divine Construct. Once he's free, both Harpe and Naegling already engage female Gilgamesh in combat. And they are lossing the fight badly, as female Gilgamesh just shot many weapons out of her Gate of Babylon. Naegling can tank most of the weapons, and Harpe was the one who charge toward her.

"A fake weapons, taken a form of a knights? Hm... Seems, like your version is far more weirder than I've expected," Female Gilgamesh said.

Smashing both his hand together, a large stone sword was summoned in his hands, a stone sword that belong to a certain Berserker. The Nine Lives, that belong to Heracules, Shirou didn't even hesitate, as he swing the stone sword toward female Gilgamesh. Without even taking a glance to such attempt, multiple shield were summoned beside her, as those shield were high rank Noble Phantasm, that stopped the attack.

Once the attack fail, Shirou release his arm, as he then smash his fist to the ground, blue lines began to spread all over the room. Soon, multiple swords erupt from the ground, and cleave through all the obstacles on their way. A single small golden portal appear before female Gilgamesh, as a small bottle of what seen to be an elixir fall in her hand. Cracking the elixir easily, the  liquid contain on the bottle, fall to the ground.

As the liquid fall on the tip of the swords, all of those attacks, began to rust and crumble away. But, Shirou wasn't finished yet, letting out a small breath. Blue lines erupt around his body, slowly, a blueprint of a katana began to form in his palm. Female Gilgamesh took notice of such action, as she can feel the dreaded sensation from the weapon which Shirou have summon. So, in reply, multiple golden portals appear much faster, than Shirou can summon his weapon, from those portals.

Chains shot out, in a speed that no human eyes can comprehend, a golden chains, that target everyone in the room, and wrap them around. Once the katana materialize, it was already to late, as female Gilgamesh already had everyone in the room, fall into her grasp. Shirou was relentless, as he plan to attack her even further, but stop, once she spoke out her voice.

"Sieze your foolery!" Female Gilgamesh declared with a noble and auhtoritive voice. "Even if you are my concubine, I won't tolerate, any further reckless and foolish action you will take. If you, value their life, then stop, and listen to the Queen order,"

Shirou was stuborn as always, so he force himself to use a skill, a certain skill that had long he use, and a skill that will probally... To defenitly, piss off the female version of Gilgamesh.

"Fall!" A direct command came out from Shirou mouth, a powerful voice of a muh more overwhelming auhtority, and preasure.

Hearing his command, female Gilgamesh, then flinch for a moment, before all the chains release everyone that was under her hand. Her body, her abilites, and her mind cannot obey what she desire. As if she was force, to obey a command! A command from someone that is far bellow her, even though she had taken a liking for him. Such action, won't be tolerated much further, as she had her own limit when it came to her personal patience.

Ruler Auhtority (A)

An absolute method that is used to assert one dominance, a way for him, to rule anyone that fall under the record of the Throne of Heroes. With this skill, that was given to him by the original Grand Ruler, he can mostly control each servants out of their free will, but there are limit to this skill.

It was an absolute and a powerful skill, for the former Grand Ruler, even though he had left such title, he still held some bits of this skill. Though, it wasn't broken as it previously was, it was more than enough, to stop a rampaging servant. And looking at the situation, he was right to use such skill, even if he will! By definetly, endanger his own life. But that is a price, that he is willing to pay, for the safety of his comrade, and master.

But, because he had lost his tittle, as the Grand Ruler, the skill will also came in a massive cause, even for a simple command. It will drain, alot of his mana, and stamina, which will immoble him, for temporary. Even if his mana rank EX, a broken skill, that no mortal should wield, even if he is a servant now. Will put alot of strain in his body, as he haven't even use this skill, after he abandoned his tittle.

As everyone can see it, Shirou was holding his throat tightly, and a face that sweat like a waterfall, the sheer mana that such skill consume. Is a double edge sword, because the limit that he possessed, for abandoning his tittle, as the Grand Ruler.

"Shirou!" Artoria shouted in warry.

"I'm alright," Shirou reply with a stern voice.

"Dammit! Someone call the medic!" Artoria alter shouted.

"That won't be necessary," a calm yet angry voice of female Gilgamesh uttered out.

Slowly, the Queen of Heroes, start to rise back to her former self, which kinda shock Shirou a little, as he also expect. The skill won't fully work, for someone with a massive ego, such as Gilgamesh, so he was already certain, that he might as well, gamble a lot. With the stern of the skill, he can't activate his main Noble Phantasm, but he can summon his knights. Though, that will be a perfect idea, he decide to held that action, after he saw it.

Female Gilgamesh, was seen to summon a Grail in her hand, as it slowly decend to her palm.

"Your current strenght is far more powerful than the one I know, but! Your foolish action, that I took as a way to entartain me. Had now been tarnish, you who dare! To order your Queen, your punishment won't be light," female Gilgamesh then raise the Grail up, as it began to shine. "Heed my command, Holy Grail! Recreate back my kingdom! A kingdom that I once strive in glory, and the kingdom that I shall use! To punish, my foolish concubine!"

"Wait! Don't!" Shirou shouted.

It was already to late, as a shinning light, cover the entire room, as everyone can only let out their final word. Before everything, went white. Hearing the command from female Gilgamesh, the Holy Grail, will grant her wish.













Disclaimer: I don't own Fate

Note: alright, now the female gilgamesh arc will begin, where Ritsuka, and Mash, will once again went back to Uruk. To rescue Shirou, and the entire Chaldea again, with some of the servant backing them up.
I had also decide to nerf the Ruler Auhtority usage, as it way to broken, so for now, Shirou will get to use the Ruler Auhtority depending on the dire situation.

Next rewrite, will center around the Irisveil Holy Grail War, which won't have female Gilgamesh for now, as I haven't finished thw rewrite around her yet.

That is all.

Bye 👋


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