Good Vs. Bad Dialogue Issues & How To Fix Them P2

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5th type of Bad Dialogue Wooden Dialogue

Wooden Dialogue as per the name Suggests the dialogue comes out hollow and empty also. The example of the Bad Dialogue is from another video game of a popular video game back in the day Resident Evil which Tecna remarks the mansion Mitzi invited Bloom and the rest of the Winx too in the Hallowinx episode being like the one in the video game somehow. It is evidence that back in Season 2 Bloom
already introduced Tecna to Earth video games stuff thus making them closer friends than the show actually tells us on screen.

Here's the full bad dialogue script layout for you guys to witness and read with your own eyes.

In the image below shows how to use the attack and defend things well in conversation between two or more characters.

Green sentences are Jill's attack towards Barry to get him to admit something and he refuses to admit it. And he continues to defend himself through the whole length of their conversation.

Another really good example of the attack & defend process is Leia's dialogue conversations with Han Solo in Empire Strikes Back does what Luke does for Han Solo in A New Hope Leia takes the attacking position to expose what Han is hiding about his feelings towards and he keep defending himself against her determined approaches.

It is also a good example when Stella & Aisha argue in Season 5 & 6 Stella attacks by insisting Aisha should do things Aisha doesn't want to and so it keeps up this natural need that Aisha has use since Season 2 to guard and defend herself mirroring the earlier arguments with Aisha's Father Teredor and Stella's side of the arguments ironically and naturally accommodating because Stella has no idea that when she argues with Aisha she is behaving like Radius and Luna when they argue and because both sense and sides of the argument occurring are rooted in both of their difficult backgrounds as explained in Season 2 Power of Charmix that clash between Aisha and Stella was so maturely done as was the forced boyfriend argument in Season 5 and the Season 6 argument about to train better all of those arguments between Aisha and Stella were natural, mature and believable and there isn't any melodrama involved either. None of the dialogue is too on the nose. There is no as You Know information they don't actually say what they are feeling and yes surface level it might seem petty but there are subtext emotional tension about other things not spoken about like when in Season 5 Stella's petty melodrama outburst that would totally be told in written form in not just all caps but endless exclamation points towards Flora, Musa, and her guardian of Sirenix right before she goes storming off to the Museum of Fashion and touches an enchanted object that turns her into the 3 year old that her voice actor is exactly sounding like in that earlier episode.
Season 4 argument between Stella arguing with Aisha spending so much time with Nabu is petty and the fact that Stella is mad out of nowhere for no reason is petty stupid, and above all immature and Aisha says it herself, "Selfish!" in the Season 4 Aisha's got no reason to apologize and she didn't need to apologize. We know since the middle of Season 2 & 3 that Aisha will not hesitate to call out Stella on some of her vital weaknesses and mistakes which is exactly what keeps her from trusting Nabu until he proves himself a second time in front of her eyes so if she wasn't hesitant to call her boyfriend out on his mistakes why would she be hesitant to call Stella out on her mistakes too. And we all know Stella has been incredibly selfish from time to time for instance The Monster and the Willow episode back in Season 1 instead of being tolerant of Flora's temporary she rallies the whole squad to scare Flora off and then Bloom scolds them all and chases after her into the swamp.

The same selfishness keeps occurring over and over again with the scenes she is in majority of the time with Brandon. And in Season 2 let's not forget how selfish she is to Bloom and the Pixies and Sky while on the March to Downland even when Bloom actually trips and falls Stella refuses to show a slight bit of empathy to Bloom who actually did hurt herself.
In Season 1 Stella's only legit ties to being a close friend to Bloom is making sure Bloom doesn't give up on her magical fairy life and two making sure Bloom doesn't lose her boyfriend, Prince Sky (in Season 3) to some other girl and these are the two most stupidest reasons to be best friends with someone. Stella is not Bloom's best friend Flora & Tecna definitely are better best friends for Bloom than Stella is. To Stella Bloom is just one of her heroine companions and that is really it.
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The guy who did the video up above did two more rounds of good vs bad dialogue I encourage you to check them out when you can, my best friends, sweet Skylights


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