Hii all🤗how are u!in previous update votes and comments are very less as usual iam soo sad🥺i miss u commenters. Pls complete so i can improve my writing skill. I know iam an amateur writer. So if i do any mistakes pls forgive me. This is my first story so i have done lotts of mistakes i know it. For all iam really sorry. if my story is bad, or boring pls u can open up. This story contains paining love.iam being soo emotional ☹️so ok lets go to the story❤️
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(She already saw ashwin's photo but today she keenly observed her father's face with interest)
After dinner...
Sivu:zaara.... Stop playing baby its almost time for your bed.let krish appa and binni ma slept too.... My good daughter... Let's go now
Zaara:okkei... Mommie.. (She kissed her grand parents and say good night and left with sivu. Sometimes sivu and zaara stayed in here so they take guest room)
Next day morning
Binni:sivu...*shouting
Raji:sivu..pls wake-up, open the door
(Sivu wake up to the shouting of binni ma and knocking the door.zaara is still sleeping, she opened the door)
Sivu:what happened raji...*confused
Raji:miss sivaangi... Mr... Mr krish is not opening his eyes he is not responding. Mrs krish is scared. Pls come down.
(Sivu immediately grabbed her mobile and went downstairs calling ambulance )
Sivu:amma.... Pls calm down....ambulance will be here in any moment.
Binni:sivu.. Iam scared... He.. He isn't responding
(Ambulance come in no time and paramedics shifted krish appa to the hospital)
Sivu :raji pls stay here and take care of zaara.i will inform you everything don't worry.
(Sivu and binni ma went to the hospital in the same abulance. Sivu called surya)
(Beep sound of machines in the room.krish appa is still unconscious after 3 hours of surgery )
Sivu:doctor how is my appa now?
Doc:he had a cardiac attak.we are lucky that you just come on time to the hospital.the surgery went well but we need to wait for 48 more hours to conform that mr krish is out of dangerous.binni ma, sivu, surya, sakthi are present at the hospital )
Sak:sivu....where is zaara?
Sivu :she is at home raji is taking care of her
Sak:sivu... U and amma go and get some rest. We will stay here...(looking at surya. Surya nodded his head)
Sur:yes sivuu... You and amma go get some rest.we will take care
(Sivu and binni ma went to home to take some rest and return back at night.as they left surya and sakthi come out of the room in to hospital corridor and sit outside )
Sak:anna...if u don't think iam being selfish. This is the time we should make ashwin come back home.
Sur:iam also thinking the sam sakthi.should i exaggerate the situation a little bit.
(Surya stood up and marched front and and back nervously as ashwin recieved his call)
Sur:hello ashwin... This is surya
Ash:surya.... Macha... How u got my number... Where is sivu...Where are u guyzz...
Sur:we are Coimbatore in our grandma old home u know it.krish appa..... Had heart attak ashwin!he had surgery now he is laying on bed.
Ash:what??? When did this happened??
Sur:in this mrng... He is still unconscious and...
Ash:and?? What??
Sur:his condition is critical... Pls come fast..*ashwin disconnected the call immediately
Sur:aishhh... This brat..he disconnected the call
Sak:is he coming or not...
Sur:he didn't say anything sakthi...he just cut the call.
Sak:lets hope he will come tdy
Time skip
(Krish appa is out of danger now.he regained his consciousness.he recovered better than expect. Sivu come visited along with zaara before leaving to the coffee shop.surya just come in time before sivu leave)
Zaara:choorya..(extending arms towards him)
Sur:oh my darling zai...
(Take her from sivu's arms and kissed her
Sur:aren't u leaving to work??
Sivu:yeah i was about yo leave
Sur:ok leave zaara with me.i will take care of her. Bring her home later.
(Surya made zaara to sit on couch inside the room.he went outside to take a call when suddenly a person enters inside )
Ash:krish appa...how are u*going close to the bed
(Krish appa opened his eyes to see his son in law who is standing and crying. He loves him but didn't show it. He know that his grand child need a father)
Krish:ashwin... U have come.
Ash:iam sorry... Iam sorry...for not being a good son in law... Iam really sorry appa...*crying hard
Krish:st--stay now..don't leave ashwin.... Promise me..
Ash:no appa.....i will never*still crying
(Ashwin stayed krish appa side until he fell asleep.
Ashwin then moved back to the couch and sat beside zaara.zaara was watching ashwin from the time he entered the room. Shee recognized him)
Zaara:appa.....
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