2️⃣3️⃣ - Coming Back to Bhaiya

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The next day Ayush and Laksh went to the track with the college students and teachers.

Laksh was excited to enjoy forgetting about yesterday!! While Ayush was very much conscious about everything.

He was taking extra care as there was so much cold weather. Ragini's presence didn't do anything good.

Don't know why but he did not like to be anywhere near that girl but she was stuck with them like glue. Not leaving Laksh's side even for a second.

Laksh also enjoys her company for some reason. It's not like he has a problem because Laksh's attention was diverted from him but he finds the Girl is behaving very weirdly!!!

The whole day went on at night they made a tent and stayed there for the night. Ayush and Laksh were sharing one tent ⛺.

They slept because of tiredness!!! In the middle of the night, Laksh's sleep broke, and he was able to doze off after that.

He went out taking the torch. He looks around only to see Ragini sitting there alone. He went near him and asked Ragini tum yaha kya kar rahi ho, soyi nahi abhi tak?

Ragini looked up and said haa woh nind nahi aarahi thi so I came here. Tum kya kar rahe ho yaha aur Ayush ko batake aaye hona warna fir gussa karega woh.

Laksh - Woh so raha hai. Aur woh aise hi gussa nahi karta pata nahi tumhe kyu hamesha woh galat lagta hai.

He is a nice guy 👦 kya problem hai timhe usase.

Ragini - Mujhe koi problem nahi hai but sayad tumhare dost ko pasand nahi hai ham sath me time spend kare. To be precise tumhara attention usase hatke kisi aur pe shift ho!!!

Laksh - Seriously Ragini Matlab kuchh bhi. Aisa kuchh nahi hai. Aisa hota the mere itne saare friends nahi hote.

He doesn't have any problem with me being friends with anyone. He tried to interact with people because of my happiness even after being an introvert!!!

Ragini - Tumhe to aisa hi lagega tumhara best friend Jo hai.

Laksh - To be honest mujhe to lagta hai use nahi balki tumhe pasand nahi aaraha that my complete attention was not getting focused on you!!!

Dekho Ragini I want to be your friend and I like your company as well but agar Ayush aur tum mese mujhe chunana pada then Ayu will be my priority!!

If you do not stop bitching about him then I can not able be your friend.

Ragini was going to reply to him but They heard Ayush's voice who came looking for Laksh.

Ayush - Laksh itni raat ko yaha kya kar raha hai?

Laksh - Nind khul gayi meri to bahar aagaya main.

Ayush - Bahar aaya to at least jacket to pahen leta laksh. It's very cold here. He covers Laksh with a shawl and says ab chal you are freezing!!

They are going towards their tent ⛺ but Ayush turns and asks Miss Khanna if it's not safe to stay out alone besides it's very cold you will catch cold.

Laksh smiles seeing how Ayush cares and how he has proven right about Ayush!!!

Reaching inside Ayush rubbed his hands as it was ice cold and scolded him kya karta hai lucky. Ab soja aur bahar mat jaana.

Laksh - Hmm nahi jaunga... And sleep.

The next day they again start tracking. They are going to the highest point.

Laksh sees the beautiful scenario and runs toward the edge to click some pictures!!! Ayush went behind him.

Laksh was so happy to see the view that he was showing everything excitedly to Ayush and unknowingly taking a step back towards the edge.

Ayush who was also busy hearing his blabbering did not notice it!!! Suddenly his leg slipped and was going to fall but Ayush held him on last moment!!!

Laksh looks down only to see a Deep trench. He gets scared for a moment.

Ayush - Shh you are fine nothing happened main hoona.

He takes him from there like this trip is over. Finally, they are returning to Mumbai.

On the journey of the way back to Mumbai, Laksh was not feeling well. He was having headaches as well as mild fever!!

He was feeling grumpy and missing his bhaiya a lot. It's the first time he stayed away from his bhaiya for this many days.

sickness did not help him either!!! He has a habit of sticking with his bhaiya-like glued whenever he falls ill.

Atharva has to take leave from his office and postpone his work till he gets fine!!!

In a way, Atharva has spoiled him with his pampering,over-caring, and overprotectiveness!!

People often misunderstood Atharva's protectiveness as overbearing and thought-like Laksh may have felt suffocation by his bhaiya's nature but Laksh liked the fact that someone was there to care and love him enough to put him in priority.

For his bhaiya, he comes first even before his self. His Bhaiya's love and concerned nature always warm his heart!!!

It's not like before their Dadi loved him or cared for him any less. But she was bound with responsibility and situations!!!

She wasn't able to give him proper time even when he was not feeling well!! She had to leave him alone even in sickness to go to work. Or else their budget got imbalanced.

With bhaiya situation is different. He didn't have to hesitate to ask for his attention.

Laksh was resting on his seat keeping his head on Ayush's lap. Ayush was pressing his head to shooth his pain.

They don't have any medicine as Laksh forgot to put the medicine box in beg in a hurry!! They can't give him random painkillers keeping in mind how sensitive he is regarding his health condition.

His headache worsens with the noise of the train!!

His eyes were getting wet with tears because of unbearable pain!!!

Ayush gets tensed and asks Laksh to try to sleep. Please rona nahi hai warna dard badge!!!

Laksh - I am not getting sleep.

Ragini just came there and said ankhe band karoge tabhi to neend ayegi. Kabse Ayush se baatein kiye jaa rahe ho.

Aur Ayush, at least you should have understood. Sone do use thodi der.

Laksh who was already grumpy became more irritated with her bickering!!!

Laksh - Ragini Please yaar stop your GK class. We don't want it. hame pata hai ham kya kar rahe hai.

Why are you here tumhe es waqt apni seat pe hona chahiye? Go enjoy with your friends.

Ragini fumes but controls her fury and says, " Laksh main to yaha tumhara khayal rakhne aayi thi.

Tumhari tabiyat kharab hai. Maine socha you would have needed me and how can I leave you when you need me to be with you?

Laksh - Dekho ragini mere sath Ayu hai he is taking good care of me. You don't have to be worried about me.

Go don't spoil your fun because of me.
It was clear indication for her to get lost from there. Which Laksh said with the sugar-coated words!!!

Not having an option she left from there.

Laksh sighed in relief. And mumbled thank god chali gayi. Paka rahi thi thodi der aur rukti to mera sir fat jaata.

Ayush looked at him and said kya hua kyu chid raha hai!!! She was just concerned about you.

Laksh - I don't need her concern uske liye tu haina. They talked for a while Laksh was smiling at something Ayush told the scene witnessed by Ragini.

Who burn in jealousy.  She thoughts uske sath to smile kar ke baat kar raha hai. Mere sath sidhe muh Baat karne me bhi pareshani hai!!

Es Ayush ka kuchh karna padega. Jab tak woh Aas paas rahega meri daal nahi galegi. Soch kuchh Ragini sone ke ande dene wali murgi ko itni Asaani se haath se nahi Jaane de sakti tu.

The next morning they reached Mumbai. Atharva was coming to pick up both Ayush and Laksh.

They come out of the train where Atharva is eagerly waiting for them!!
He was waiting for the last hour.

Laksh shows him from a distance and screams in happiness ☺️ Bhaiya and wave.

Atharva looks around and finds Laksh a few feet away from him. He went towards them and took the luggage from Laksh's hand.

They went out and went to sit in the car but again Ragini called Laksh from behind and hugged him tightly and said to him bye Laksh see you tomorrow in the college.

Laksh awkwardly hugged her back. As they became normal friends during the trip. Atharva saw this and he did not like her near his baby brother.

Ragini was not leaving him she was talking to him while hugging him. Atharav waited for a few moments but Ayush who was extremely frustrated with her presence did not hold back and clear his throat.

Laksh somehow breaks the hug and looks behind. Atharva asks Tumhara bye bol ke hogaya ho to chale. We are getting late.

Laksh - Haa bhaiya chalte hai. And went to the car and sat inside.

After sitting in the back seat beside his brother he snuggled close to him and said I missed you so much.

Atharva also hugged him and kissed his forehead while saying I missed you too. but when he kissed his forehead he felt it warm and checked putting hand and found him burning with fever!!!

He got tensed and said Laku Bukhar hai tujhe bacha bataya bhi nahi.

Before Laksh said anything Ayush said he was having a fever from last night. Medicine bhi hotel me bhul ke agaya.

Atharva looks at him and notices he is looking exhausted!!! His eyes were having dark circles like he hadn't slept.

Atharva - Soya nahi thik se? Maine bola tha na laku take care of yourself. Kitna thaka hua lag raha hai. Waha Masti karne me aaram karna bhul gaya.

Laksh - oho kuchh nahi bhula mai. Ye sab aapki wajah se hua.  Mujhe apke bina waha nind hi nahi aati thi.

Kitne din se thik se soya nahi main. Abhi ghar jaake sona hai.

Atharva - kya karu me tera. Yaha permission lete waqt to bada bol raha tha..main reh lunga dhyan rakhunga and all.... Bade dialogue mar raha tha.

Laksh - Haa to see how responsible I am. Wapas aake bimar pada waha nahi so that you can take care of me.

Atharva shook his head in disbelief

After a while, they reached home. Atharva asked the servant to take the luggage and went inside with both. Finally, he is at peace after so many days.

Laksh is at home in front of his eyes. Now he doesn't have to worry about anything. He is glad that he comes back safe to him.

He asked them to get fresh up till he arranged food. He made Laksh's favorite dish but now that he was having a fever he thought to make some light and healthy food for him!!!

After having meals and medicine Laksh went to sleep while Atharva sat beside him in bed and started doing work from home only.

He asked Ayush to rest and stay here for a day so he also rested in the allotted room.

This day went on at night after having dinner both brothers were sitting in bed as Laksh who slept for almost the whole day was not sleepy.

Atharav asks him about the trip and he shares every tiny detail with him. But He didn't mention Ragini even once.

Atharva found it strange that his brother was hiding her!! From what he saw in the morning they were looking close to each other.

Atharva - Laku woh ladki kon thi subah who hugged you.

Laksh said casually that she was Ragini Khanna a college mate.

Though Atharva doesn't mind if Laksh is befriended with Girls. But the sername Khanna set the alarm. It could be a coincidence but he can't take it lightly.

He couldn't help but try to know about her more from his brother. If they are just friends or there is something more between them.

Atharva - Kya chal raha hai tum dono ka I mean.... Is she your Girlfriend?

Laksh burst out in the fit of Laughter seeing his bhaiya's Face.. Hahaha hahaha bhaiya seriously..

Yes, she is a girl and she insists me  becoming her friend. So technically.  She is a girl and a friend of mine, not a Girlfriend.

We just met on the train when the trip started. It's not even a week since we became friends. Or to be precise She made me her friend.

Atharva - to woh teri friend nahi hai?

Laksh - I kind of don't like some of her habits. I mean she is a good person who behaves very sweetly but she always bitch about Ayush.

Atharva - Aur tujhe pasand nahi hai koi Ayush ki bitching Kare haina.

Laksh - Hmm

Atharva - Laksh She is still an unknown bacha and we should not trust strangers.
Keep your distance. Tu samaj raha haina.

Laksh - Hmm don't worry. After talking for hours Laksh fell asleep.  But Atharva was wide awake thinking about the girl.

Why is she so interested in becoming Laksh's friend? What is her agenda to get close to Laksh? 

There is something odd with her. Which did not sit well with him. He shows the behavior of Ayush also.

How he looked irritated when that girl was close to Laksh. he never behaves like that with anyone. He is sure that Ayush didn't like the girl near Laksh.

That is something he cannot take lightly. he asks his man to get her information.

He hopes and prays that the Girl does not create any trouble for his kid brother.

Here Ragini also reached her home. She was having lunch when someone called her.

Stranger - Jis kaam ke liye bheja tha woh ho gaya?

Ragini rubbed her forehead in irritation and said he's a tough nut to crack.

Itna Asaan nahi hai use fasana. Upar se uska dost jab dekho har jagah Glue ki tarah chipka rehta hai.

Stranger - Itne din se Rajkumario jesi jindagi jine ka kharcha me tumhare bahane sunane ke liye nahi kharch raha.

Jitna ho sake utna Jaldi use apni jaal me fasao. Varna vapas usi chol me rehna padega jaha se utha ke tumhe laya hun.

Ragini - main koshish kar rahi hu par kya karun me woh Ayush mere raste ka kanta bana hai.

Stranger - To us kante ko hatao Jad se. Kuchh bhi karo. Koshish nahi kamayabi chahiye mujhe.

Woh bhi Jald se jald. Varna jaise mene Sadak se utha ke mahel me rakha hai, waise hi mahel se utha ke sadak pe fekne me der nahi lagegi. Person hang up the call.

Ragini in frustration threw the plate and went from there.

That's for now

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