Not sure what I think about this, I liked the concept but once I started it I feel like it's kind of all over the place, please tell me what you think. Thanks.

It had been a few weeks and Jac had been discharged. Zosia sat by Ollies bed as much as the doctors let her, she talked to him, held his hand, she was trying to stimulate a reaction. Any kind of reaction, she didn't mind how small she just wanted something.
"Look Ollie, I know it's probably easier for you to stay asleep but it's tearing me apart. You need to decide. If you want to stay then you need to start fighting harder because this is not going to be easy. And it's fine if you don't think you can, I know it might be too hard and you might not want to wake up. I won't be mad at you if you want to let go, no one should have to wake up to something they don't know or go through the pain that you are. But please just decide, I love you more than anything but I don't know what I'm supposed to do. I can't grieve because you're not really dead but I keep sitting here hoping that you might eventually wake up because its destroying me. I need you to give me something Ollie. A sign if that's what you want to call it. Please Ollie. Anything."
She held his cold hand, as she had done everyday since she got back. She felt like she was almost begging Ollie to wake up and she knew how unlikely it would be but she didn't know how much more she could take.
"I don't even mind if you don't remember me. That's something I can learn to deal with and try to help you with. But I can't deal with this. I'm not strong enough to sit here for much longer just waiting when I don't even know if you're going to wake up. I need to know Ollie. Please."