As what the title said, i'm thinking about re-writing this first book of mine, why? Look at the poor writing skills in the previous chapters compared to chapter 9 and the constant 4th wall breaks that are pretty shit and annoying, thank you to those 2 people for telling my stupid ass that.

Probably in the re-write of the book, its gonna be longer until our main guy reach actual civilization, aka more chapters instead of me just rushing the shit out of it, interaction with the wildlife of Terra and its dangers and other things, what do you think. Okay? No? Whatever works.

And another question is if people do want a re-write, should i do it on a seperate book or just on this book?

Well, i'll wait, in the meantime you decide and read another book, whilst i go try to finish the next chapter or just post the draft when the re-write choice wins.

I've decided i'm re-writing this shit book on another book, which kinda means i'm changing up how the book goes and removing some stuff thats supposed to happen in the re-write.

Well, expect the re-write to happen in a week folks.
Oh and, have this for no apparent reason.