Hi there guys. I know that you all haven't really been happy with how this story ended or how the middle area started to work out, so I was wondering how you all would feel if I re-posted this story, but with (hopefully) better grammar since my grammar was total shit when I had been writing this story, and sort of a different like story line. Like towards the area of when Jerrica got pregnant it would be changed up a bit. Just give it some thought, and I'll try to work with you all with fixing this story up. Comment your thoughts please.