Just to be clear this is my first story soooooooo, ye its probably gunna be shit.

As a formality could anyone who would actually put themselves through the mental torture of watch this, give me any feedback/tips for these stories id appreciate it a lot. so

this is just gunna be pics of the story to help you picture it

ben art i found:

my version:

obviously its deku but ye you get it.

the different omnitrixs in this:

this snake is so cute and anyone who disagrees can fuck right off!