💚 The Remnants 💚 by LushDreams

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Date: Sunday June 7th, 2020 (6/7/2020)

Book: 💚 The Remnants 💚

Author: LushDreams

Reads: 192

Status: Ongoing

I will read a little bit each day and give a full review at the end of the week. Read with me! https://www.wattpad.com/story/179085653-%F0%9F%92%9A-the-remnants-%F0%9F%92%9A

Review: To get started, let me just say that I LOVED it, although it did leave me paranoid for hours which, if you think about it, is actually a good thing, since it means that you were very descriptive and you definitely made me feel like I was there. I think at some places you could've specified who was talking and who was moving instead of using "she" or "he" and you could've touched up on the grammar and punctuation a bit, bit the story itself is quite good and I can't wait to read more of it! ❤️


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