^let me make bad jokes damn it

11) More than one character in a scene ಠ_ಠ ಠ_ಠ ಠ_ಠ ಠ_ಠ ಠ_ಠ

I put five of those because this one is important af

I also really like that face

Anyway

FOR THE LOVE OF (insert the belief of your choice. Can range from Jesus to Science)

WHEN A NEW/ DIFFERENT CHARACTER STARTS TALKING

START.

A.

NEW.

PARAGRAPH.

@mainlyfanfictionwritersbutalsobookwriterstoo

I absolutely CANNOT STAND IT when I'm like "this fanfic looks lit yo" and I open it and all I see is

"Hey Brittney, wanna go to the movies?" He asked me, giving me a sexy grin that I love. "Sure!" I told him, knowing that he didn't mean movies. "Maybe we can even invite Chloe and Tracy with us?" "Yeah let's totally invite them!" Chloe poked her head through the door. "I heard my naaaaaame~" it was like beetlejuice, we said her name too many times. Because that is a new and original idea (lol but Brittney and Kyle are MY OCs! Do NOT stealll!!!!!)

Sorry totally took a jab at fanfic writers
But I'm also a fanfic writer I can make that joke

(It's funny because it's truuuuueee)

Let me just edit that real quick.

"Hey Brittney, wanna go to the movies?" He asked me, giving me a sexy grin that I love.

"Sure!" I told him, knowing that he didn't mean movies. "Maybe we can even invite Chloe and Tracy with us?"

"Yeah let's totally invite them!" Chloe poked her head through the door.

"I heard my naaaaaame~" it was like Beetlejuice. We said her name too many times.

There's also this thingy

Got it? Good. Moving on.