My first ever story, please give tips! :)

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I think He's in the attic again, when will he learn that he's not supposed to be in there? he's supposed to be in the cage I don't even understand how he gets instead the house to get to the attic, his cage is in the shed but anyway, I don't think he likes it there, it's a little bit too small for him Even in the attic he has to hunch over, I don't think he likes it here... But he has to learn to listen. Brother isn't home, brother is the one who put him in the cage since I'm not allowed to I always get told "he might hurt you" but I don't believe it he never hurts brother so I'm going to try, brother is too far to get home in time anyways.

I walk upstairs and walk down the hallway to the area where the attic is as soon as I turn down the hallway I see the attic door open "I knew it, he's always in there" I thought to myself, I walked over to the hole in the ceiling I looked up and wondered where the ladder went, I started looking around for it, not really a surprise it's gone He probably threw it somewhere, he doesn't need it he can just stand and crawl in there, but I can't and I can't find the ladder I'm going to have to go to the garage, I start walked back going outside, I m usually not allowed to be in the garage because brother does his "work" there but it's an emergency so I think I'll be fine. I grab the ladder and a flashlight just in case, heading back inside to the attic.

I put it up and started climbing, I poked my head inside "I'm glad I grabbed the flashlight" I said talking to myself I took the flashlight and shine it around the attic not seeing anything until I heard something behind me fall and break, I immediately shine the flashlight behind me seeing the tall hunched over figure behind me my eyes widened as I see how tall it is I've only had it explained to
me, seeing it in person is way more different then I thought...

I climb down and think about what I just saw I didn't think it would look like...that...,
I go to my room leaving everything I had there I sit on my bed and call my brother telling him what happened but leaving out what I did I don't want to make him angry, I hang up I start to lie down but I brother calls me back I pick it up and he asks me "did you try to get him back in his cage." Brother said with anger in his tone "Fuck..." I thought I really thought I got away with this "Yes I did, but nothing happened!" I say trying to not make brother mad "I've told you so many times to stay away from him why would you do that!" Brother was mad I don't think I've ever heard brother yell at me... "Listen I was trying to help and not interrupt you at work!" We're just yelling at each other at this point "Did he see you." Brother sounded calmer and a little worried "Why?" I ask confused "Tell me now did he see you or not" "I don't know,I wasn't really paying attention to what he was looking at" As I say that I hear something.

I hear something screeching "Wait hold on I'll be right back," I tell my brother hanging up the phone I walk over to my door slowly and stick my head around the door and I see him, he's almost right in front of my door I close my door and lock it, "I thought he only goes in the attic I never got told he comes down.." I walk over to my phone and start texting brother

"Why did no one tell me that he comes out of the fucking attic!"

"He doesn't.. unless he's hungry, but he just got fed, so he shouldn't be hungry, I told you to leave him alone, you need to start listening."

Brother seemed upset.. ...know I didn't listen, but I needed to do something, brother excluded me from him. What did he expect? Why would brother leave me alone with...That thing... I wasn't prepared for this, I was never told what to do in this situation.

"I know I need to listen! You're always saying something to me about me needing to listen! I know, I know, stop reminding me, just what do I do?"

"Well... Just.. Leave him alone, let him do whatever he needs, he'll go back, hopefully.."

Hopefully? Really? Brother doesn't even know what to do, Great.

I set my phone down on my bed I stare at my door...

Is it open?

Why is it open... And where is he at..
It's quiet. To quiet
I look around my room, confused, is he back in the attic? Where else would he be, but I didn't hear him go up there.. I walk to my door and look out it, I don't see him, I don't hear him. Maybe he's the one who's listening and he went back to his cage.., I slowly walked out of my room looking around, and I crept over to the back door, it was locked..He's still inside. Alone with me. I turn around.

Thankfully he's not there, I slowly try to make my way to my room, and as I turn the corner I bump into a table stand that has a vase on it, it falls and brakes making a loud crash.

As soon as it hit the floor I heard running coming towards me, it didn't sound human.. It sounded, unlike any noise I've ever heard.. And within a few seconds, everything turned black, my vision faded, and the last thing I felt was intense pain in my back, stomach and throat, it felt like I was being ripped apart, like I was having my organs removed and my vocal cords being torn out of my throat.

What is brother going to think...

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