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22-02-2021

The Girl Who Rang the Doorbell

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When a stranger rings your doorbell, do you usually open it?
In this short story, we follow the narrator, a relatively egocentric and very much spoiled young man, who doesn't want to open the door to a woman who appears to be doing door to door sales.

About one hour after she rang the bell, he decides to check the door again, and is surprised to see that the girl is still there, immersed in the silence of an empty corridor.

He asks himself if she has been standing there all this time, and starts wondering: Is it best to ignore her again, or just open the door for once?

Read the funny thoughts and scary moments the protagonist lives in this very weird afternoon of his life.

Authors note:
Story is completed. If you can't see all the episodes, it might be a bug, so let me know and I'll upload again.
You can read this and support me on patreon (patreon.com/maksymaguiar)

I originally wrote this story in portuguese, so if you prefer that language you can find the story on my profile.
I translated the story to english, and this is the first time I'm doing this, so if you find any mistake, let me know.

This might be just a short story, but it's my first story. Hope you enjoy!
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