Impossible(CreepyPasta OC story)

So this is just the story about my CreepyPasta OC. There are no pairings and no other CreepyPasta's are actually named, so I guess its more like a stand alone CreepyPasta.
I would like feedback, anything from constructive criticism to a score out of ten is very helpful, also please point out if I make any mistakes. I drew the cover myself.