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This is my first ever story, I'm trying to improve my writing. Criticism welcome (most wanted from experienced writers). The story is about an immortal girl named Alana, Alana Aranza Zavala. Who has been living on her home world longer than those who protect her. She watched the people of her homeland grow into the fine warriors they are now. Her powers have grown incredibly over the 700 years of her existence. She's known for being immortal but also helping protect her home from the terrible beings of her world who were exiled. The hostile beings of her world were exiled 500 years ago and their descendants grew up to the lies of their ancestors. They grew to believe that the ones who exiled them, were evil and they wanted the power for themselves. In reality, they were exiled because they formed a pact, a secret pact that they kept from the powerful ones. They knew that Alana was immortal and they wanted to rip her chest open and take her heart out, as they believed it held a deep power. Alana had amazing abilities herself, battles she was involved in did not last very long. Her powers consisted of : > Future visions < Her visions are spotty and consist of 3 short clips from a day or 2 in the future.> Flight < She has 2 beautiful ice white wings.> Hand charges < Both hands can make a large green ball of powerful energy, when combined the power is truly amazing. > Super strength < Her strength is 5x as much when angry, even then she is still extremely strong when in a less dangerous mood. > Fantasia

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