Continuation of What It Means To Annotate: Examples Below P7

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She wanted to get sent to the fields — to get away from bein' round Mas' Henley and Miz Lilly. (19 words, that's a very sneaky plan, gal. Didn't think I told you so? Whelp, I did, Skylights, just now) That was a silly way to go 'bout it, and I told her so, later on. (16 words, probably was a silly way to go about it anyways.)
Anyway, Spicy's plan didn't work. (5 words)
'Cause just to spite his wife, Mas' Henley took sides with Spicy. (12 words, as I said before and as the Bible says before very randomly once in a while even an unjust judge can actually bring justice for the mistreated indirectly.) Say all Spicy needs is to be trained. (8 words) "Why do you care what happens to me?"
Spicy asked me later. (12 words in past two sentences) "I saw your back and I wouldn't want that to happen to you again — not to nobody!
And I like you —" Spicy looked real surprised - like nobody had ever said that to her before. (34 words in the very last two sentences) (Awesome, so amazing when friendships blossom so very strongly, aren't they, my sweetest friends?) So for now, Spicy stays with us in the kitchen. (10 words) And I'm glad. (3 words) I think she might be, too. (6 words)

11: 34th diary entry annotated.
First Sunday in May.
Cooked and served three meals. (5 words)

Two house guests. (3 words)
Toted waters for baths. (4 words)
Helped with the clean up. (5 words)
I am so tired. (4 words, I believe it all that running back and forth doing chores here and there is quite exhausting even for me today.)
No spirit to write. (4 words, not at all surprised sometimes the brain wouldn't think of things for quite a while to write down.)
I've still got to wash out my dress, so I'll start the week clean. (14 words, washing clothes is very important, it helps your week start off way better than it has already began, Skylights.)
101 chapters in this writing advice book to go, Skylights. Next Chapter will be my halfway point that is why I added this book to my completed reading list of books.
My Brothers' Grimm book will finish soon too, Skylights as I just Published Chapter 182 yesterday.
I have 18 chapters left to go in that book too.


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