•18• Deal Breaker

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L e l a n i

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Brodie's hands run all over me and my body can barely take the pleasure he's creating as his fingertips trail against my skin. My heart beats fast inside my chest, overcome by excitement and anticipation of the unknown. I've never been touched like this, but I know that it feels good and I know that I don't want him to stop. A sense of nervousness begins to wash over me as I trail my own fingertips against his arm, finally building up enough courage to grab his hand and bring it to my breast.

Brodie's tongue glides against my skin, sending goosebumps rising against my neck as he continues placing his mouth on me. My nipples are hard beneath the padding of my yellow bikini top, and suddenly I'm aware that I want his mouth on them too. I'm panting just at the thought of it, but he stops his movements, hesitating and pulling his mouth away from me.

Uneven breaths leave him, and his face is solemn as he looks me over with gentle brown eyes. "Is this okay, Lani? I want to do this right. I don't want to make you feel pressured or like you need to do anything to prove yourself to me."

For a second, I swear I feel my pulse stop- speechless at his intention to make sure I was comfortable with everything that was happening. I'm lost in his stare, what little tension I have left in my body immediately leaving because those words alone were all I needed to hear to feel completely comfortable in his arms.

Brodie is safe.

A smile can't help but spread across my face, and I nod desperately, needing his hands back on me again. "Just shut up and kiss me, Brodie."

And he does. His mouth crashes into mine without any reluctance and my veins are once again coursing with desire as I taste his lips. My tongue travels to his and they tangle together, sending another bolt through my body. Brodie weaves his fingers through the hair on the back of my head, gripping tight against the strands while our kiss becomes hungrier. His hips grind into mine, his erection pressing into me and making my bathing suit bottoms become more wet.

His mouth tickles my ear as it meets against it, his voice deeper and raspy as he hushes out, "I really like kissing you." His teeth gnaw gently against my lobe, "And touching you..."

"Then touch me more," I beg, the area between my legs starving for attention.

The surfboards leaning against the palm tree above us create the perfect security from what little amount of beach-goers are still left. At this moment, I feel extremely grateful for the privacy because I don't plan on stopping anytime soon. Fingertips pinch against the nylon strings tied around my neck, tugging them slightly away from my skin, teasingly.

"Please," I whisper, wanting him to continue.

Brodie yanks the padding away from my chest, parting the triangular material to the side and exposing my breasts. The cool, damp breeze rushes against my nipples, making them harder and I watch his Adam's apple bob against his throat as he stares down at me yearningly. He keeps his eyes on mine as he lowers his mouth down to my chest, and I refuse to peel my stare away as he meets his lips to my raised nipple. I can't hold back my moans as his tongue begins playing with it, forcing me to clench my legs at the nearly unbearable satisfaction it's causing. With his free hand, he cups my other breast, making sure to give it attention as his mouth works against the other one.

My back arches against the sand, rugged breaths escaping my mouth in contentment. Wanting Brodie to feel as incredible as he's making me feel in this moment, I reach my arm down between our bodies. My fingertips run along his bare stomach, feeling every ridge that outlines his toned abdomen. It was already enjoyable just to look at his body, let alone touch it and experience the feeling of it against mine. I force away my anxious thoughts as I trickle my fingers against the elastic band of his swim trunks.

"Is this okay?" I whisper, immediately receiving an earnest nod from him for me to continue.

I smile to myself hearing the way the question makes his breath hitch and with ease, my hand slips beneath the damp fabric, gripping gently against his hard-on.

"Oh, Lani," he hisses out, resting his head against my bare chest as he revels in the sensation of my touch.

Unsure of what to do, I ask, "Does that feel good?" I run my eyes along the veins that protrude from his neck and biceps waiting for his answer.

"God, yes ," he growls, darting his head down and sucking the flesh of my collarbone. His lips and tongue begin traveling down my chest, gliding all the way down to the prominent area of my hips and making his cock slip out of my grasp. With tender movements, Brodie's hands guide me, pushing back and parting my legs open. I rest my head back down into the sand, relaxing my body as he smooths over my bikini bottoms and preparing myself for what he's about to do next. Without even looking again, I know his stare is locked on me and he pushes the wet fabric to the side, revealing my sex that's already pulsing before it's even been touched. I'm shuddering as his thumb meets against my slit, parting it with ease. He freezes his touch, gauging my reaction and tense breath.

"Lani, look at me." The expression playing across his face is serious and he insists, "We can stop. Anytime you want, we can stop."

"No," I detest, shaking my head and craving for him to continue. "I don't want you to stop. I want this."

A handsome smirk pulls against his lips, accenting the dimple on his left cheek as he continues his thumb's movements, stroking gently against my clit. The movements are so simple but have my thighs and legs tingling, making me bite down hard against my bottom lip so as to keep silent and not to draw too much attention to us. With one finger, he enters me, pumping slow and causing me to gasp from the incredible sensation. My body writhes in the sand, unsure how much longer I can take before the pleasure becomes too much.

"Oh, Brodie," I hum, cutting my eyes through the space of our self-made shelter and up to the palm leaves above.

His fingers begin to move in and out of me faster, and he dips down teasing the flesh above his fingers with his tongue. "Fuck," I whimper.

He pulls his mouth away from me for a moment, his voice coming out husky as he asks, "Does that feel good?"

"Mhmm," I moan, unable to create any words. A ray of sunshine cuts its way through the grey clouds in the sky, the rain falling around us finally beginning to let up.

"I'm going to watch you, okay?" The way the words slip so casually off of his tongue has my skin heating up more, and I nod eagerly, wanting nothing more than his dark eyes on me. "I'm going to watch you as I make you come."

Oh, please do.

Brodie's fingers slam back into me, and he doesn't hold back as his motions grow faster and harder, becoming slicker as they pump into me. I clench around him, riding out the euphoria I never knew I'd be able to experience, let alone knew existed. Just as promised, his stare stays on me, his mouth sucking back against his bottom lip as he watches me unfold in front of him. Every muscle in my body tingles and my skin is hot to the touch, a burning sensation lighting me on fire from the inside out. Every part of my body is numb and I lie back, trying to gain control of my unsteady breaths as they leave me.

Brodie helps me in tugging my bikini bottoms back over my exposed skin and next, he slithers up my stomach and chest, allowing his hands to do the same for the top piece of my bathing suit. He chuckles taking in my flushed face, only causing me to blush more.

His face inches closer to mine as he hushes out, "We broke our deal."

I break out into a fit of giggles, shielding the embarrassment evident on my face with the palms of my hands. He peels them away, laughing and teasing me further, "But I suppose I can keep another secret for the sake of your professional image."

"Oh, shut it," I chuckle, pivoting our bodies, switching our positions, and pushing his back down against the warm sand. I straddle him, meeting my ass against his hips and feeling his hands grip against my waist. "Technically our lessons are over, so did we actually break any rules?"

"I guess not," he replies simply, a huge smile ripping against his lips and revealing his bright teeth.

Feeling bold, I grind against him, his hard-on pushing back against me and making me wet again. Brodie sits up against his elbows, and I dip my mouth down to his, tasting his lips as I continue rubbing against him. My hair is unruly, stringing down my face- the messy curls encasing both of us. His fingers brush them away, tucking them behind my ears before moving his touch back to my face and caressing my jaw tenderly. I want nothing more than to return the pleasure he so easily gave me, and with that thought, I slither down him, kneeling between his legs. My fingertips and hands are trembling as they move to the band of his swim trunks, and he must sense nervousness because he sits up once more, calling my attention, "Hey, listen. You don't owe me any favors. I told you before, we can stop. Okay?"

"No, it's not that," I mutter, cutting my gaze away from his. "I-I want to do this, i-it's just" His ears perk as he waits for me to continue, "I just want to do it right."

Brodie's eyes widen as he comes to understand the true meaning behind my sudden apprehensiveness. His expression turns soft as he cocks his head and verifies, "You've never done this before, huh?"

But for some reason my eyes can't find the will to stay on his, a sense of fear drawing them away from watching his reaction as I shake my head and confirm my lack of sexual experience. 


"Lani, look at me," and I do. "It's nothing to be ashamed about."

"C-can you show me? Show me how to touch you as good as you touched me..."

"You show me," he quips, a handsome grin crossing his face as he grips my hand and slips it beneath the material of his shorts.

There's a slight tremble in my fingers as they wrap around his hardened length, but his hand squeezes tighter around mine and calms the thoughts racing through my head. Together we move, his palm directing mine as it moves up and down against his shaft.

"Just like that," he purrs.

Natural instincts draw my mouth down to him, and I suck against his tip, continuing to pump against his shaft. He wears a devious smile as he watches me, releasing his grip with confidence as he whispers out, "You're doing perfectly. That feels so good."

My mouth slips further, feeling his length hit the back of my throat. His head tosses back, his entire body relaxing as he puts his trust in me. I suck harder, gradually making my movements faster and synching them with the moans falling from his lips. "Oh shit, Lani. You're gonna make me come already."

Brodie's hands move to my head, graciously and gently tugging my chaotic hair away from my face and gripping it back into a ponytail for me as I continue to suck him off. His legs wriggle beneath me, riding out the satisfaction as I finish him off with my hand.

"Oh, fuck!" He bellows out one final time, his come dripping down his penis and running down my hand.

Using the fabric on the inside of his swim trunks, he makes his best effort to clean us both up, removing the evidence of the naughty acts we just committed under this freaking palm tree. My fingers assist him in covering his exposed parts, and he smiles, yanking my body upward. "Come here, you wild thing."

I giggle, meeting my head against his bare chest and reveling in pride at my new accomplishment. I tilt my eyes up to his, whispering, "Thanks for the guidance, Maverick."

"Guidance?" He scoffs, smirking. " Lani, that was all you."

Sunlight hits both of our skin, illuminating his handsome, masculine-featured face and making his dark eyes appear a shade of honey-brown. "I just want more," I hush out fervently.

"We've got time," he quips, "Now, how about that date?"

I try my best to hide my giddiness, dropping my head down into the crook of his neck and hiding my smile. Pulling myself together and bringing back my confident stance, I finally give in, "What did you have in mind?"

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