Purplemist14

[ CLOSED FOR REVIEWS ]About 120K fanfictions emerge when you directly type Harry Potter in the search bar at Wattpad.While some of them are amazing and well worth every reader's time, there are a great many fanfictions which are either too cliché, contain too many errors or just not that appealing.In this help book, we will first discuss the cliché plots and errors made in writing and then there's also a lot more such as tips on improvement, the dos and don'ts of writing HP fanfiction, book reviews etc.***P.S This is an opinion book and a completely hate free zone. I am not bashing anyone or any type of writing skills. And the sole reason for the creation of this help book is to help not hate.✴️Highest Ranking: #1 in reviews#1 in helpbook#1 in potterverse#19 in Random.…

thief_queen

An OC review book for those who want feedback on their characters. I give constructive criticism and I try to give non-biased feedback. Started: July 2017 Completed: October 2017 Highest Ranking: #702 in Random…

OrpheusAngelos

I've never done this before, but I'm gonna do my best and give my honest opinions! One more thing, I have not played/seen all games so until then, I will not be reviewing all characters! But! I will also review OC's if requested!You can request which characters I do! But if I have not seen them, I probably won't do them unless I'm just reviewing their looks.(or I'm actually interested in the character)DISCLAIMER~: I do not own Danganronpa or its characters!…

Purplemist14

Hi everyone!So this book is basically me being just me, that is random to be precise. It contains ways to annoy characters, jokes regarding the Potter universe, one shots, videos, reviews of fanfics plus much more.And just so you know, this is an opinion book. I will be stating my own opinion on stuff so if you don't agree with me, that's totally fine but I really don't want to see any hate on this book. State your opinion, correct me if I'm wrong but please don't pester me.P.S I suck at updating so read at your own risk. ;-)…

PaniniPanana

My first attempt at writing fan fiction. (Y/N) (L/N) is a pretty normal girl, very uh... special and unique. She's quite the random one but hey aren't we all? She meets the short stack of pancakes known as Levi. I wonder what will happen between them? (Probably fights-)Anyways heyo guys, I'm gonna go back and fix up the previous chapters, reading through my story I noticed so many errors and the incorrect uses of point of views. So if you notice a bit of changes in previous chapters that's why.…

Frostfal

I have decided...that I want to review OCs. For some reason.…

_thistroublemaker

"The Moon makes you a half... and then you find your mate. And together, the two of you, make a full" ***** It didn't start with a rejection. No. The Alpha didn't reject her, but he didn't accept her either. So she was left hanging, alone. For nearly 14 years. Now, she's come to terms with it. She can't have a second mate as the Moon grants them to only the ones who are rejected. So, yeah... she's alone. With secrets one too many, that can cause havoc in the entire supernatural world it gets hard. Especially when you and your friends are cursed Every curse has a counter curse, but will Del be able to find it? Or will it be too late? With Clans of other shifter species at her back, things are bound to get difficult. **** This is the story of Delilah Selene Raymond, daughter of the Gamma of Ash Moon Pack. **** I know the description sucks, but this is my first werewolf story... so bear with me? *Offers a cookie* #Peace.…

LaceyWeatherford

Of Witches and Warlocks readers will love this story, which is a retelling of The Trouble with Spells, but from main character Vance Mangum's point of view. Loaded with new scenes and dialogue, this story will take readers on an adventure even deeper into the life and mind of Vance Mangum.Overview: He was on the run. Love wasn't an option, But Fate had a different plan. Magic abounds and sparks fly, when destiny brings Fire & Ice together. Reviews:"Vance Mangum landed a place on my all-time favorite book boyfriend list, and no one has been able to bump him off of it. I honestly can't put into words how much I loved Fire & Ice, and how excited I am for the next installment of Book of Shadows!!!" - Christina Silcox, Literary Redemption "What did I think of Fire & Ice? Well, if you could see my face right now, I think you'd know. I am completely, undeniably, irrevocably in love with these characters!" -Raquel Auriemma, Roc n' Read Back cover: Time passes . . . sometimes too quickly, other times not fast enough, but that's not what's important. The essential thing is what we learn about ourselves during that passage of time and how we apply it. Will we continue to follow the destructive paths we find ourselves on? Will we give in to circumstances that seem completely unchangeable? Or will we desperately fight to hold onto those we love and to what's good inside us-no matter how terrible the cost? I only know I would do whatever was required of me to keep Portia, but in a world of witches, warlocks, and demons, anything can happen. My name is Vance Mangum, and this is my story.…

mekaylapridget

Delaney Carson is currently one of the most famous singers globally to date.She first rose to prominence when she was only ten years old singing covers on YouTube.At the peak of her YouTube rise she was discovered by a talent scout who recommended that she sign with them and branch out to other ventures, acting being one of them.Hunter 'McKenna' King is currently one of the most famous actresses in America to date.She first began acting when she was only seven years old as a solution to helping her Mother meet bill deadlines.Albeit Hunter acting at seven years old, she did not officially hit her rise until she was ten years old.Delaney and Hunter had no clue of each other's existence until the both of them ran into each other on the set of a powdered milk commercial.The two of them were immediate friends, I would go as far as to say they were the closest on set.All of this friendship came crumbling down the second Delaney accidentally spit her strawberry milk out on Hunter during their last taping.In response to this Hunter poured her chocolate milk over Delaney's head, solidifying her hatred for the girl.…

Purplemist14

[ CURRENTLY ON HOLD ]Ever since Stephenie Meyer released her Vampire Romance novel Twilight in 2005, it took the young adult readers by storm and spread like a phenomenon. As of now, there are a total of four novels in the Twilight Saga.Now that the original story of Edward and Bella Cullen have reached its end, fans are still writing about them such that there are about 48.5K such fanfics on Wattpad alone. While there are many great fanfics out there which appeal to the reader instantly, yet there are a few which are either too cliche, have too many grammatical errors or are just not up to the mark.In this help book, we will first discuss the cliché plots and errors made in writing and then there's also a lot more such as tips on improvement, the dos and don'ts of writing fanfiction set in the Twilight Universe, book reviews etc.***P.S This is an opinion book and a completely hate free zone. I am not bashing anyone or any type of writing skills. And the sole reason for the creation of this help book is to help not hate.…

JSPRomComs

[Complete] A flirty, romantic adventure & feel-good read!***Lana Asfoor was content to live with the status quo and ignore her piling debt. Ignorance is bliss, right? Yet any ideas of playing things safe are thrown out the window when a charming, mysterious thief steals from her.Risk taker Jack Hanscom, whose name coincidentally rhymes with handsome, soon takes her on an adventure to reclaim what was stolen. And Lana finds out it may be a little more complicated to get her life back to order when her heart may have also been stolen in the process.***Features & Awards:🏆 Grand Prize Winner Summer Fest Contest 7/22 🥇1st in Chicklit, Campfire 2.0 Awards 8/22🥇1st in Romance, Rain Flower Contest 8/22🥇1st in the WSP Awards Season 2 9/22🥇1st in Chicklit, The Hearts Awards 10/22🥇1st in Romance, SW Awards 11/22🥇1st in Romance, Ultimate Genre Awards 11/22🥇1st in Romance, The Final Rose Awards 12/22🥇1st in Chicklit, Clouded Ink Awards 12/22🥇1st in Adult, Those Romance Awards 12/22🥇1st in Chicklit, Auctor Awards 12/22📚Dreamland Community's Undiscovered Books 6/22📚@NewlyWrittenBooks Fun Female Fiction 8/22📚@Humor Isn't It Romantically Funny 11/22📚@Romance Head Over Heels 4/23***Reviews: "I LOVED IT. I loved the characters. It was just a gorgeous story!!" - @MiniMoxx"I was planning to read a couple of chapters today but the story is really captivating and funny. I can't stop reading it" - @MissAgataaa"Stolen Heart is AMAZING! I can totally see it as a paperback that I've placed in my bag to read during the quiet moments when I'm out and about." - @GabPierrette"Romance lovers!! You HAVE to check out this book!" - @HeidiCarroll…

petrichor_idyllic

REQUESTS ARE CLOSED Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS and see what I think. Don't worry, I'm not going out of my way to be brutally honest and mean just because I can because honestly, that's just painful. I will be as honest as I possibly can without tearing your character to shreds and giving ways you can improve.I will review characters from existing universes as well, there's a list on the first page of fan bases I'm apart of. This is all for fun and you don't have to follow my critiques, if you think I'm wrong then that's fine, nothing here is meant to cause offence and I am simply here to help you all improve.…

sagun3337

Its a marriage law fanfic where Hermione and Draco are chosen for each other like usual.Hermione is shocked to find Malfoys accepting her as their daughter-in-lawIts my first fanfic everPlease read it and send reviews too...positive rebukes are welcomedP.S:I do not own the characters…

carlgrimeussy

[DISCONTINUED]My first ever published writing. It is so cringe 😭.𝐒𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐛𝐨𝐲, 𝐩𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐨𝐮𝐬𝐥𝐲 𝐤𝐧𝐨𝐰𝐧 𝐚𝐬 𝐃𝐞𝐥𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐭. "𝐍𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭 𝐈'𝐝 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐚𝐲 𝐈 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐲𝐨𝐮."𝘐𝘯𝘤𝘭𝘶𝘥𝘦𝘴:• Rinney/Finbin (Finney x Robin) • Angst and Fluff (NO SMUT)! • Very brief Brance (Bruce x Vance) • The missing kids friend group adventures (LMFAO) • Personal headcannons_______𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘳𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘶𝘴𝘦𝘥 𝘰𝘳 𝘳𝘦𝘧𝘦𝘳𝘳𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘰𝘸𝘯𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘺 𝘮𝘦.…

IRRELEVANTAE

❝ Our memories together will transcend the sea of time. ❞ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━⠀ ▍ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛIn which Jungkook wonders why a certain fan of his wears a paper bag on her head and lets his curiosity bloom into something else. Something more. ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━⠀ ▍ʜɪɢʜʟɪɢʜᴛᴇᴅ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡꜱ❛ Your writing style is great and this idea is so original! You have me at the edge of my seat wanting to know who she is! Good job. ❜─ Sooaura❛ Stunning work. I felt the emotion through your writing. ❜─ sakibunni ❛ I am going to simply say that i enjoyed the story. It is refreshingly different in format and style. ❜─ Dreamofshadows ❛ That was beautiful. Thank you so much for taking the time and effort to make such a beautiful story. ❜─ RealSuga_Baby❛ The story is wonderfully original and fresh. I loved how the short chapters added to the atmosphere to it. It didn't feel terribly rushed or anything. I loved the characters and the mystery behind each one. Incredibly well-written. Bravo. ❜─ LoveMyLattae DON'T PLAGIARIZE.…

HeraHarker

A modern Pride and Prejudice story. Only sexier.Mira is a refugee, starting a new life far from home. She has to deal with her troubled past, her son, and her enigmatic boss, while her only weapon is her killer sense of humor.It's a slow-building love-hate story, witha strong female lead;two control freak lawyers, fighting for dominance, in denial of their feelings;an alpha discovering his submissive side;lots of humor and humanism.~73K words~~~Warnings:- Mild language. Characters talk like white-collar workers usually do in real life.- Chapter 43 has mild sexual content. It isn't very graphic, it's emotional, rather, but if you don't want to read about it, just skip it. It won't affect the story.~~~Featured:- WP Romance's Read Together and Head Over Heels reading list- WP ChickLit and Women's Fiction reading list- WP New Adult's Romance reading list- WP Adult Fiction reading list- WP Classic Authors Twisting Austen's Magical Moments reading list- WP Retold reading list~~~Reviews:"You have a lot of literary elements going for you: your style is chock full of subtext, humor, and intelligence. There's a careful craftsmanship in world-building, character development, and theme."Scripturam Awards"A truly unique story with a quite remarkable a plot! It has the ability to convey the emotions stirred within the characters to the depth of readers heart!"The Graphomania Awards"I am beyond impressed with this work. The characters feel real; three-dimensional. The narration does not feel forced in any way, it flows as it reads."The Dream Awards"Some books lead with suspense and cliffhangers that even if you don't want to continue the book you do so just to sate your curiosity. But then a rare gem like this comes along and without any cheap tricks it pulls in, you just continue and keep reading it and you may not even know when you reach the end."Shadow City Awards…

elusive_6788

Meet Eva King, a high-spirited manager in an international firm. She scraped her way up from zero to hero in the cold, hard world of power, money, and politics, where nothing and no one was going to get in her way.Until handsome Sven came along. Now, what was Eva going to do with a muscular Scandinavian university student with strawberry-blond hair, ocean-teal eyes, and a heart-warming Colgate smile?Put Sven into the mix and Eva's world was about to be stirred, shaken and rocked. Crazy, crazy, love was right around the corner, ready to hit her like a bus driven by a lunatic, and nothing was going to stop it from happening.🎉 Featured in four official Wattpad profiles: @adultfiction, @cupid @Romance, @Chicklit. ♥ Featured in Summer of Sisterhood in 2019, a project by Wattpad's official @Chicklit🏆Awards: in the author's profile. ---WARNING: This book contains some swearing 🖕, a little spice ♥️🌶, side-tickling humor 🤣, and a SPIDER (forewarning to arachnophobes!). 🕷If you see this story anywhere else but Wattpad please report it and alert the author. Copyright © E Pettersen 2021. All rights reserved. No part of this book may be transmitted in any form without written permission from the author, with the exception of quotations in articles or reviews. This book is fiction. Names, characters, and most places are fictitious. This book may not be reproduced and sold for commercial purposes.…

Oaapha

Basically, you send your OC in and I either yell at it for a long time or hug it. Oh, I'll probably also offer you some constructive criticism while I'm at it. Things to improve, and whatnot. I created a book similar to this on Quotev, but was overrun with desperate users begging me to review their (usually very bad) creepypastas. I've just seen books like these kicking off here in the WattyWings' community, so figured I may as well jump on the bandwagon once again! I may be a bit slow in getting back to you, but please bear with me. I am a busy person and have duties et cetera outside of here.…

lili_lamon

What if Kenric survived the Everblaze? After Kenric burns away in the Everblaze, Oralie's life dissolves into sobs, sorrow, and despair. That is where Book Three of KOTLC ends - with love lost to fire. But what if Kenric didn't die in the flames? He promised to Oralie that they would be together, and he is a man of his word. However, fire isn't the only enemy. They must disappear from the hawking eyes of the Neverseen, and even fight against their own society in order leave their life of Councillors behind. After that is all over, will they still have love left?- - - "The plot was beautiful! Once I started reading I couldn't stop." - Scraletcherry- - -PREVIEW:Then she heard a knock. Followed by a bunch more, until her house was filled with the clattering of knocking; desperate knocking that eventually slurred down, but didn't stop. Oralie whipped herself away from her nightmare-etched thoughts, her eyebrows burrowing in confusion. Clad in soft, rose-colored nightgown, she hustled from her chair and to the door, her eyes scanning through the window curiously.But then her eyes widened, for it wasn't who she thought it was. It was a man. With red hair littered with dust and soot. Oralie felt like she got punched in the gut. Her body shivered so badly she nearly toppled over, but she grasped her door's handle and stabilized herself against the migraine that was cutting her brain into a zillion pieces. No. No it couldn't be, she thought. Exhilarated, baffled, and petrified for her life, Oralie turned the handle. The door hit the wall with a clang. Oralie gasped in sharply as she examined a man, covered in burns, leaning against her front porch's railing heavily. "Kenric?" she breathed, unable to trust the world anymore. He gave her a tired, lopsided grin. "Miss me?" Then he crumpled to the ground.- - - Author's Notes: - 6,520 words- This is a PG romance- Disclaimer: All characters belong to Shannon Messenger…

blazingpeacock

this book is basically stuff about total drama and disadventure camp! (mostly disventure camp tho lol, especially the 'jaiden' ship)WARNING: a LOT of fangirling lmfao…