Just Doesn't Stop

Background color
Font
Font size
Line height

While Kieran and Ciara tried to get sleep, their killer was lurking their next victim. 17-year-old Valerie Connors was walking back into her estate. It was only 7 at night so it was still light outside. Valerie had heard all about the crimes and was very scared, but she had her phone on her, her parents knew where she was going and had a curfew for her. Valerie walked out onto the lane and into the city of Kilkenny. She walked past MacDonagh Junction Shopping Centre and was heading for Mcdonald's. As cars passed her by, she felt safe and eased up a little bit. This however was a mistake. She kept going and soon enough she reached Mcdonalds. Valerie could breathe. She had long, black hair, green eyes and had a nose piercing. As she walked into the car park, she saw her friends who had already gone through the drive-through and they smiled and waved. "Hey", Valerie said as she walked over to the Volkswagen Golf and got into the back. Her friend, Joe, handed her a bag of food; 6 chicken nuggets, chips and a drink. "Thank you", Valerie said, smiling and digging into the food. Everything was going swimmingly. 

30-minutes later, Valerie had to say goodbye as her friends were heading into Carlow for a night out. It was still light out so Valerie walked back as it was only a 15-minute walk. The roads were quieter and she saw a huge John Deere tractor with a trailer go past. It stopped at the red lights and Valerie walked past it again, not making eye contact with the driver. She walked a bit faster, turning into her estate and the tractor just carried on. As she turned in, a black figure jumped in front of her and before Valerie could even scream, knocked her over the head. The figure dragged Valerie into a bush and put her in the back of a black Nissan Qashqui. It just didn't stop. 


You are reading the story above: TeenFic.Net