Deal Gone Wrong

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Kaydence's POV

"Ho, get out!" I rolled over to face the thot that I had over for the night. It was 10am and she was still here. I didn't play that and she knew it. "You want me to walk?"

"What you think? I'm not taking you, do I look like a taxi driver?"

She rolled her eyes at me, "Asshole." I ignored her and went into my adjoined bathroom.

I took a quick 15 minute shower and got dressed in something quick, grabbing my Promethazine off of my dresser before walking downstairs. "Why the fuck are you still here?" This bitch was sitting down on my couch on her phone.

"I'm not walking, your driver said that he would take me home."

"He's not taking you anywhere, get out!" I yanked her up by her hair and dragged her through the foyer and onto the porch, "You're such an asshole.. I can't stand you!" She yelled as I slammed the door in her face.

When people thought of me they thought of that heartbreaking ass light skinned boy that's in HLW, and I didn't mind that either, it was true. I was a heart breaker and I didn't give a fuck about any females except for my daughter, mama, and little sister, that's just how it was with me.

I walked into my kitchen and poured the cough syrup into a 2 liter of sprite, turning the bottle upside down when my phone started ringing. It was my boss, Marvin.

"Yeah?"

"Transaction at the warehouse, 2:00. Be there."

"A'ight."

"Whatever happens is on you. Eyes open nigga."

"Is it those MPR niggas again?" I asked him while pouring the lean into a styrofoam cup.

"Yep."

"Bye man." I said now irritated. He knew how I felt about those niggas.

"Don't play with me KD if you want me to put you in a higher position, do it."

"1." I hung up . I wanted a higher position but damn, it wasn't worth losing my life over.

I finished my cup before walking back upstairs to change my clothes again. I decided on a black tee, a pair of dark robin jeans, and the ferrari 14s. I added some extras, a Louie Vuitton belt, a necklace that I got custom made by the best jeweler in Baltimore, and my diamond cut bottom grillz. It's been a while since I wore this thing.

After getting dressed, I grabbed my iPhone and my trap phone, heading back downstairs. I decided to drive my Porshe today.

As I was pulling out of my garage I got a call from that annoying ass baby mama of mine. It seemed like everybody wanted to get on my nerves early this morning.

"What?" I answered.

"When are you coming to get your child?" I wanted to hang up in her damn face.

"I'll come get her tonight." I said annoyed as hell now.

"And leave her some money."

"Bye Ayriel." I couldn't stand this girl, she was a dirty bitch but I could never turn against her though, we had a child to raise. She did me so wrong in the past and a nigga was still grieving, to be honest. After riding for a good 15 minutes I turned in the direction of the trap and pulled into the driveway.

"What's good KD?" Dontae dapped me up as I walked into the kitchen. This was like my bestfriend, my brother. He never switched up on a nigga.

"Where Marvin at? That mother fucker always want ME to make transactions." I said, pointing to myself.

"He just told me about that. It's aight bruh, I'll ride with you." He chuckled.

"Your scary ass. . If you don't wanna do it just say so. I'll just give that 2.5 to somebody else." Marvin walked in the kitchen on us talking.

See, he didn't tell me that he was giving me 2.5 million IF I made it back alive, he just said that we had a transaction to make.

I knew that those MPR niggas weren't nothing to play with but HLW wasn't having it either, and the whole east coast could tell you that but this didn't change the funny feeling that I wasn't getting.

"So you gone do it or not KD? Let me know now."

"Yeah, I'll do it.."

Dontae and I pulled up to the warehouse and I grabbed my Uzi before hopping out of the car with him right by my side. "You ready?" I asked him.

"Yeah" I nodded and dapped him up as we made our way towards the warehouse. I was feeling real bad about this shit.

There were four big ass dudes at the front who questioned us before we could get inside. "What y'all got for us?"

"15." I answered, I knew they could understand the code talk.

"Of what?"

"Weed." I answered, throwing the bags over my shoulder. These things were heavy and these motherfuckers wanted to give us a damn quiz.

This was a small transaction so I felt like Marvin knew something because he was throwin me 2.5 mil for basically nothing but whatever. . . money talked.

One of the dudes slid the door to the warehouse open for us. I didn't trust these niggas at all. I could sense some fuck shit finna pop off.

"Damn. Took y'all long enough." I guessed that this was the boss. He was sitting at a long wooden table with a patch over his left eye.

"Yeah, I know. My bad." I said and threw the three duffle bags on the table.

"Let me weigh this first." He said and told one of the dudes to get a scale, mugging me down and shit. He watched me the whole time as he removed the weed from the bags. "Smells good."

"Fuck he looking at?" Dontae whispered to me when the dude directed his attention to someone else. In a matter of seconds I felt a nigga come up behind me. I quickly turned around and pulled my gun from my waist band.

POW!

Whoever it was shot me before I could shoot him, this nigga's aim was off tho. Instantly I could feel the heat from the bullet in my shoulder.. "Fuck!" Only one shot went off and that was weird as fuck to me. Most niggas shoot to kill or at least I did.

"Come on. We gotta get the fuck outta here!" Dontae panicked, pulling me to the car by my shirt.

"Fuck man! Don't take me to the hospital, I'm good."

"Look bruh, you gotta go. You gotta get that bullet out. Just relax." I was dizzy and I was breathing mad hard.

"Hell no man, don't take me to the hospital. Take me home, it's in my fucking arm! I'll be okay." I yelled. I hated hospitals with a passion. 

"No. You're losing too much blood yo." I wanted to slap the shit outta this nigga, I could get the bullet out my damn self. Me going to the hospital would lead to the police trying to get involved.

Dontae's POV

I rushed KD through the ER doors. He was losing an ass of blood. Shiiiiit, he wasn't gonna die on my watch.

"I fucking hate you for this." He said to me through gritted teeth, he looked like he was about to cry but I knew he was a soulja.

*

I waited in the waiting room for about two hours and now it was me and his baby mama waiting. He was gonna be straight. In a matter of seconds, his mama and sister came through the doors.

"Dontae, oh my god. What happened to him?" His mom asked me, she looked hurt and I could tell that she had been crying.

"We were chilling and bullets just started flying through the house. He couldn't move fast enough and got shot in the shoulder." Of course I lied. He would fucking kill me if I told his mama that we were making a transaction. "Oh god. Is he okay?"

"Yeah, he is. A nurse should be comin to give us some information in a few."

Just as I was finishing my sentence, a fine ass nurse walked into the waiting room. She was mixed with whatever the hell she was mixed with and she had a fat ass, she was beautiful as fuck to say the least.

"Family of Kaydence Ortiz?" We all stood. "Where is he? Is he okay?" His mom asked. The nurse smiled lightly, "He's fine. He lost a large amount of blood but we were able to get the bullet out just in time. He was hit in the shoulder."

"Oh god! Can he have visitors?"

"Tomorrow. We have to let him get some rest and being that visiting hours are over, we can't let you guys back. So sorry." While she was talking I was in a daze just looking at her fine ass.

Next Day

"Ma, I'll be back. I'm going to see Kaydence." Moms was in the kitchen cooking breakfast.

"Tell him to get well."

"Aight." I grabbed KDs car keys as I headed out the door. This nigga had 4 cars and all of them were nice. He was living lavish as hell and was only 22.

As I made my way to the hospital I thought about that fine ass nurse that I saw. I remember looking at her ID, her name was Daniella Rodriguez and I was looking forward to seeing her again. I wanted to get at her before Kaydence saw her ass.

Kaydence's POV

"How are you feeling Mr. Ortiz?" One of the many nurses who I had seen today asked me.

"Good. Now can I go home?" I did not wanna be here. I hated hospitals.

"1 more day, be patient." Patient hell. I wanted to go home.

"Would you like anything else to eat?" She brung me some nasty ass hospital food. Watery ass grits and some bacon that wasn't even crunchy. "Nah, I'm good on that."

"You got an iPhone charger?" I asked her. My phone was completely dead and I knew it was blowing up with messages.

"Yeah, I'll have to get it from my car."

"Appreciate ya." I watched her as she walked out. She was bad and she had a fat one. Ya boy wanted her and I was gonna get her, right here in this fucking hospital.

"Hey, how you feeling?" My mama and sister walked in with a plate of food a few minutes later. She must've known that I was hungry.

"Good. I wanna go home." She came and hugged me with a expression of hurt on her face. "I want you home too baby. Who's house were y'all at?" I knew Dontae lied for me, that was my nigga.

"Jordan's." I answered quickly, making the name up.

"Well we're gonna find out who did this to you. I can't have nobody tryna kill my baby." I hated when she did this mushy shit. "I'll have some investig-" I cut her off mid sentence. "Calm down ma, it's cool. I got this, fuck the law. I don't need them in my business." She looked at me like I was crazy and raised her brow.

"I hope you aren't doing anything illegal." Why the fuck does it matter? I'm bringing $1,000 in everyday, not every week but everyday I thought.

"I'm not." My sister looked up from her phone as she tried to keep herself from laughing. "Fuck yo ugly ass laughing at?" I asked her and threw my plastic spoon at her. She stuck her middle finger up at me and threw it back.

"Can't even ask a nigga if he's okay, cold hearted ass."

"Whatever. I sent you a text." She said and rolled her eyes. "Oh yeah, let me hold your charger. That nurse is taking too long." She handed me her charger and sat back down. Seconds later Dontae walked in with Money Man Marvin.

"Hey, how y'all doing?" Marvin greeted my mama and sister before walking over to me.

"What's up? You alright?" He asked me. Dumb ass question, I'm breathing aren't I? I thought.

"What you think?" He jumped at me, "Watch your mouth boy" I chuckled. "And I got that 2.5 for you." He whispered in my ear and headed towards the door. Dontae left out behind him. It was like the nigga was shell shocked or something. He was acting like he never experienced anything like this before.

This story didn't get good until like the 10th chapter, but vote anyway! Thanks.

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