Ch.4: Hidden Stranger pt2

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Hidden Stranger pt2

Well my shift is almost over but after this it's straight to the​ club I go. But anyway Johnny and I got to meet Jillian's nephew he's quite cute but we're not each other's type.

Good news is him and Johnny hit it off although he's straight maybe he's curious. Johnny said he's fine with it.As long he

Funny you know cause I can already tell they're going to be a handful as friends.

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I walked into the club there's a bunch of security outside. Like there's at least 20 guards outside.

I don't know if some of these guards just wanted to fill up on me or it was just procedure or something like that. I've been patted down four times.

Finally they let me into the club I walk into the elevator pressing the button to go to my floor

Right as I walked in my lovely manager decided to join me in my ride. He starts leering at me I looked at him and he smiles at me.


I look away cause he's starting to creep me out more than he usually​ does.

He comes closer to me and traps me against the wall "Malaysia when you gon stop playin these games and let me take you out​ baby." he said getting closer to my face.

I mentally cringed and put on the best smile I could "I'm sorry​ but I literally have no time for dating I'm always working I never even have time for myself. I'm so sorry I can't you understand right?" I said raising an eyebrow

His quickly turned sour "Yeah I do. I totally​ understand." "Thank you for understanding​ everything " I smiled at him.

"Yeah I understand that you think you're too good for me. Wit yo stuck up ass you ain't even fine. Broke ass hoe. Hope Big Man sees you and fire's you on the spot lil ugly ass also I'm docking 25% of the tips you make tonight cause you was 5 min late." he said to me.

I got off the elevator rolling my eyes not wanting to say anything to him and start a argument.

I walked away to get ready for my set as I got closer I saw all the girls gathered in groups chatting away.

I could hear little bits and pieces if they're conversations.

I chalked it all up to they were talking about the owner and how they can't wait to see​ what he looks like among his other features.

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Right as I was coming off the stage Liam my manager walks up to me looking more​ pissed and smug than usual making me feel anxious​

He held out his hand for his percent of my earnings. He smiled at me "The big man wants you as his server for him and his crew so don't fuck it up or else I'll fuck you up and fire yo lil ass." he said voice full of venom.

I handed him his money and started to head to the back to change my outfit. I have to look my best.
(Her outfit while serving him)


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Hidden Stranger P.O.V.

The moment my eyes landed on her I was intrigued.

I've had my share of women but none of them could ever be compared to her. So I asked that *tuffo merda* of a manager I have working here that I wanted her as my server for the night.

I've got this feeling that I can't describe. I'm confused as to what it might be.

Can't figure if ​ it's lust or love at first sight with this woman. I rarely felt this feeling since HER and I'm not sure if I want too. Seeing the woman finally walking into the V.I.P. section to our table I this stomach churning feeling.

My group consisted of my cousins and I. There's Castiel , Benny, Leo, Gabriel,and Dante all ranked from oldest to youngest.

When She walked up to us I stared at the beauty she was. "Hi how are you guys tonight I'll be your server for the night my name is Coco Creme." She said sweetly

I was mesmerized​ by the smile that she graced us with.

Dante spoke "Hey Girl whatchu doing here I ain't know you worked here." he said smiling.

Instantly I started thinking​ she was one of his hoes. I raised a brow at him with a look that said "is she one of your hoes."he just shook his head no at me.

Hmm interesting​...

Benny starts rambling on about what he wants to drink and to bring him this​ and that.

"Enough." I said cutting him off I looked at her just in time to see her shivering "I do apologize​ for him sometimes he can get ahead of himself please believe​ our mothers didn't​ raise us to behave in that fashion. We have manners I promise."

She smiled "Apology accepted and besides I got everything he said." I scrunched my brows together "Really."

It's not that I think she can't it's just...

"Really I did, I got everything." she said handing me her notepad. "Well I'll be damned. You're the the first server to ever get his whole order right and didn't have to have him repeat himself. Thank you so much."

I said shocked.

She graced me with a smile even though I knew she couldn't​ see me.

I figured this out because every time I speak to her she just looks in my general area.

She finished taking our order and left to go get them together.

Castiel was the first to speak "So Dante how do you know that nice young lady she doesn't really seem like your type." Donnie started laughing so hard he was​ starting to turn red while slapping the table.

I started dying in laughter I've seen Donnie laughing hard but never this hard he looks like he's about to die.

Castiel looks so confused "What, what did I say."

"Man you just say whatever's on your mind.We're laughing because you're so blunt it's too funny." I said while cracking up.

Castiel looked off into the distance with a blank look on his face.We stopped laughing immediately​.

He looked at us "Why'd you guys stop laughing?" he said smiling then started to laugh himself. "You're right I don't know how I never noticed before." we all joined in laughing our asses off.

Coco came back with our bottles and everything else we needed. " Here's your drinks, glasses, and ice I'll be right back with your food." she said walking away all of a sudden my eyes were glued to her ass and the way her hips swung from left to right.

When out of nowhere I felt a smack to the back of my head. I immediately went to look for the source of the abuse "Yo what the fuck did you do that for Castiel."

I was pissed now "Because you were staring at her like a piece of meat, just because she works here doesn't mean she deserves treatment of that kind our parents didn't raise us to disrespect women or stare at them that way." he said speaking truthfully.

"Man he right yo moms would beat you right now if she saw you actin like that." Dante said.

"Although we all can agree she's a very very attractive young lady." Benny said

We all chuckled "She's a nice girl man Castiel right about her man leave her alone and you too Benny." Dante said.

"What why me too I didn't do anything wrong besides look at her ass." I said rolling my eyes.

She came back with our food "Did I get all your orders right the Orange-Chipotle Shrimp with the pulled pork sliders for you." she said pointing to Benny "correct." He said ⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬

She pointed to Leo "And for you the Ultimate Luxe Burger with extra cheese with the Beer-Battered Fries."
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Next up was Gabriel "The Creamy Dreamy Sun-Dried Tomato and Basil Mac N'Cheese with the Wedge salad." She said moving on to the next ⏬⏬


"For you the Tri-Tip Steak with Tomato Romesco and on the the side a Loaded Baby Potato." She said speaking to Castiel.⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬

"For Dante the Pasta with the Soft Shell Crab and as the side Deep Fried Parmesan Zucchini for you.".⏬⏬⏬


"And lastly but not least for you sir the Chicken Parmesan Sticks with the Grilled Asparagus with Bacon and Feta. Did I get them all correct with you all." She said smiling at us.⏬⏬

"Mission Accomplished ma'am. May I shake your hand for you are the opposite of what that dipshit said you were going to be like. You're one of the best employees here that I've seen tonight. You're a very valued employee for me but I will make sure that Liam will stop harassing you.Also you will be tipped well."I said

Hearing in the corner in a low voice "That's not the only thing you're trying to tip her." I heard Leo say as Benny and him snicker with each other.

I swear those two are thick as thieves they have what some might like to call a bromance going on. Even though Gabriel is Leo's brother they stick together through thick and thin even though Gabriel,well hate is a strong word so I'm going to put it as he strongly disagrees with their friendship.

I stood up still in the darker parts of our section reaching my hand out for hers I heard her mumble "Lord have mercy on my soul." I guess she liked my tattoos.

She grabbed hold of my hand as much she could her hands are so tiny. My hand practically swallowed hers whole I heard her mumble "wow he has big hands." "Well thank you, you have very small hands." I said shaking her hand "Oh my gosh I am so sorry I didn't mean to say that out loud."she said apologizing.

"No it's perfectly fine you were just stating a fact."I said to her "That's not the only thing perfectly fine." I heard Gabriel whisper to Donnie and Leo.

I just rolled my eyes at them, after shaking her hand I sat back down to start eating my food "I'll be back in a little while to see about dessert for you guys just let me know if you need anything." She finished saying.

I watched as she walked almost stuck in a trance.There's something different about her.

"Man I think you hooked on the booty you ain't even tasted bruh." Dante said to me.

We finished eating right as Coco came back she smiled "So how was everything, was it good?" She said

"Everything was beyond excellent." Castiel said.

" That's great so how do guys feel about dessert?" She asked raising her brows "That would be absolutely perfect who wants to order first how about you first? Have you seen anything you've had your eye on tonight." Donnie said winking at me they all laughed.

While Coco stood there confused I just tried to ignore them I looked at her "Just ignore them they're a bunch of ubriaco idiota that's italian for drunk idiots."I said to her.

*"Damn hai dovuto gettare l'ombra come l'uomo che si divampa fuori. Come la merda è proprio di fronte a noi."* Leo said to the guys shaking his head.

"Okay okay we're done I'll have the Apple Pie Milkshake with the Glazed Apple Pie Bites." Gabriel said.⏬⏬⏬


We all turned and looked at him like he's crazy "What it's good don't look at me like that." Gabriel said.

"Well I'll have the Chocolate Peanut Butter and Banana Icebox Cake with a Salted Caramel Snickerdoodle Ice Cream Sandwich." Leo said finishing up⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬

"Oh, what you look at me crazy but don't look at him like he's crazy for ordering the shit he just did." Gabriel said huffing.

I just rolled my eyes at him.

"I'll have the Lime Angel Food Cake with the Blood Orange Vanilla Martini."Donnie said winking at her.⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬

Castiel started ordering"I'm gonna be pretty simple and have the Devil's Food Cake with the Almond Milkshake."⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬


"I Dante, shall be having the White Chocolate Pumpkin Creme Brulé and one of those Almond Milkshakes." ⏬⏬⏬⏬


I chuckled at him "I'll have the Sweet N' Salty Chocolate Cake with the Molten Caramel Mini Cake and can you bring some more ice please." ⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬⏬🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫


"Okay I got everything would you like me to go over the order again." she said looking at us.

"Nah you're good. Thank you." I said to her.

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We paid for our food leaving behind a great tip for her.

Maybe I'll come to the club more maybe

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