Captive Pt. 1

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Unknown POV~

There she was. Our next target. Taking her back would be worth so much too. 

I'd been watching her. Go from school, to home, to work, and back home. She didn't live alone. She lived with her two brothers and her very old grandfather. She had her own room though. 

The only issue with that though was that it was on the second level. In order for me to get her, I'd have to go inside the house. Good thing I got back up in case anyone wakes up. 

I wouldn't mind keeping her for myself though. I mean, shit, she was gorgeous. Had all the right curves in the right places and I bet she could do wonders with that mouth of hers.

"We all set for tonight?" One of my partners asks. I nod, looking back at the house we would be breaking into. "You think we'll pull it off?"

"I hope so. But we have to be completely focus. Meaning no trying to go around and look at shit in the house."

"I-I don't do that!" 

"You do that every time we do a job," my other partner says. "It's almost gotten us caught four times."

"No one asked you!"

I roll my eyes, pulling off as I see the Freemans approach their house. Tonight, sweet Jada... I'll see you tonight.


Huey POV~

I've noticed this car pass by our house every time we come home for the last month. It was a 2018 black Dodge Charger. Whoever was in it, was always watching over our house and always sat around at night when they saw all our lights off.

I mentioned it to granddad but he didn't think much of it.

"You ever notice the Charger that sits outside the house everyday?" I asked Riley.

"What Charger?" Riley goes to the blinds, discreetly looking outside. He notices it and nods. "Hell yea! I thought I was crazy or sum. That shit been there everyday for the last few weeks now, right?"

"A month the be exact," I tell him. I tried to think of any possible reason someone would just be parked outside our house like that everyday.

"What if they tryna sell us something?" Riley asks.

"That's not likely. People don't just park outside someone's house and not say anything. Let alone do it everyday."

"What's going on?" Jada asks, coming downstairs. 

"There's been a 2018 black Dodge Charger parked outside everyday for the last month. Have you noticed?"

Jada nods,

"I questioned that a while ago. But they seemed harmless so I didn't think much of it."

"Well make sure you keep a close look out and keep your guard up," I tell both my siblings. "We don't know who this is and what they're up to."

They both nodded. Riley went upstairs, getting ready for work, while Jada stayed downstairs and waited for him. 

I knew something was up. I didn't know what it was, but I had a very bad feeling about those people in that car.


No ones POV~

The twins got off work at 9 and were picked up by Huey. The car wasn't there but Huey still told his siblings to be alarmed at all times. 

The night went on as it normally did. The Freemans all ate dinner, showered, and got ready for bed. 

"Should we call the police about the car?" Jada asks, her older brother.

"Why? What are they gonna do?" Huey asks her.

"Well, for start they'll at least investigate. And that car has been passing by the house for the last 15 minutes."

"We're not calling the police, Jada."

"But, Huey, I really feel like we should-"

"Jada, we're not calling the police."

Jada gave a sad look as her brother scowled. Her sad expression soon matched his. 

"Fine. But if something happens and you could've done something, you're gonna feel like shit."

Huey rolls his eyes as he watches his sister leave. 

It was close to midnight, and everyone in the Freeman household was sleeping peacefully. The only noise that could be heard was a the air conditioner and the small fans each Freeman had in their room. 

A weird presence woke up Huey. He could sense someone in the house that wasn't his family. He quietly gets up to see who he sensed. Before he knew it, someone punched him hard in the face. 

The Freeman fell hard on the ground, feeling blood drip from his mouth. Huey couldn't see who exactly had hit him but he could definitely see a dark figure in front of him.

"Who are you?" He questions. The figure says nothing, just kicked Huey again, causing him to fly further back.

A scream was heard and Huey was instantly alarmed.

"JADA!"

Whoever was in their house was after Jada. 

"LET ME GO!" His younger sister screamed. He couldn't see her clearly but he could see her enough to know that she was struggling to be freed from the persons grasp.

Riley and Robert were up now after hearing Jada's scream and both were struck on their way to help. 

"LETS GO!" One of the intruders yell. The two intruders put on masks as they threw a smoke bomb into the house. 

"NO!" Riley yells. He tries his hardest to fight but the gas was making him weak. "J-Jada.."

Words Jada said stormed Huey's head,

"If something happens and you could've done something, you're gonna feel like shit."

The Freemans fell into unconsciousness as the intruders made their escape. 


Huey POV~

I woke up to my head hurting and my stomach bruised up. I looked around and noticed Jada's room door was opened. 

JADA!

I ran to my sisters room and my heart seemed to hurt. So it wasn't a dream. Someone really came here and took Jada.

"W-what happened?" Riley asks, waking up too. He notices where I'm at and quickly looks in Jada's room. "That really happened... They really took Jay."

I couldn't hear anything he said after that. I just heard the words Jada told me in my head. This was my fault. Jada had a feeling something was going to happen and I decided to wait rather than take action. I put my sister in danger.

I punched the wall, tears streaming down my face. I felt a hand on my shoulder and Granddad sighed.

"We gotta call the police, boys."


Jada POV~

I woke up to my head hurting. I wasn't in my bed. I wasn't at home. 

I opened my eyes and noticed there was a bag over it. 

What the fuck? Who the hell still makes these scratchy ass sacks. 

I shook my head, trying to get the sack off my head. It was suffocating and I'd be more than happy to see where the fuck I was.

"You take that sack off your head and I'll have to kill you," Someone said. I've never heard this voice before, but they must be retarded.

"You wouldn't kidnap someone just to kill them. That would defeat the purpose of kidnapping them."

There was a silence before someone said,

"We could rape you and kill you. You ever thought about that?" 

"You would've raped me by now and would've been disposed of my body. By the sound of it, we're driving somewhere, so you obviously need me alive to go somewhere."

"She's smart," another voice chimes in.

"I told you she was," a third voice said. Each voice was different.

I can tell by all three voices that they're 19, like Huey. They, of course, are all males. The first voice was a little timid. He wasn't sure of himself. The second voice-

"You're too quiet," the second voice says. "What're you plotting?"

"Not plotting. Just analyzing."

"Analyzing what?" The first voice asks. 

"Who you all are. By the sound of it, you're all at least 19."

With saying that, the sack was lifted off my face. My assumption was correct. They all were teens. One was Asian with short brown hair. He must've been the first voice. 

The guy sitting in the front seat was brown skinned with a low fade. He was the second voice. 

The third voice definitely matched what he looked like. His voice was deep. He was dark skinned with dreads. 

These were my captors.


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