EvanLazuli
Dragon Boy

Dragon Boy

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Chapter One of a story I started. I'm only posting chapter one to get some feedback so I can see what works and what doesn't.It was a normal assignment: "parent" an egg for two weeks to learn about responsibility. For Kyle, however, the end of the assignment brings about a whole new beginning.…

A Miscellaneous Series of Shorts

A Miscellaneous Series of Shorts

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Short "stories" with no other place to go.…

Sense of Something

Sense of Something

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This story deals with themes of depression and suicide. Do not read if these subject matters make you uncomfortable. Sometimes when you feel like you have nothing left to live for, something happens that renews your will to live. That is what happened to Gary, a young man living on his own, isolated from the rest of the island. After a seemingly endless line of rock bottoms, something happens that gives him a purpose. I've been working on this story for three, maybe four years now. I really hope to get it published some day, so I'd appreciate some feedback telling me what's good and what's not-so-good; I want to make it the best it can be. Please tell me what you like and don't like!…

Paper Route

Paper Route

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Think about a job you've had. Have any of your customers ever caught your eye? Were there any regulars who came in and you looked forward to that time right around noon when they came in? Taylor is a papergirl whose route takes her through a poor part of town, and on one of these routes, she meets a beautiful girl named Beth. Taylor is immediately enamored and always looks forward to handing Beth the daily mail, but quickly discovers that this beautiful girl is trapped in a not-so beautiful situation.…